ISS 2014: for kaiosea

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Title: 15/Love
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hoya/Sungyeol
Length: 5.7 words
Note: Hi! Sorry, this is extremely rushed, but I hope you enjoy it anyway and have a happy holiday.

To: kaiosea
From: Your Secret Santa

Comments

[kaiosea]

Thank you so much for writing this for me!! Every day I lament the lack of hoyeol and how I otp a rarepair and I’m incredibly happy that you decided to write them. My vague prompt came out of my sports anime obsession and I love what you did with it, especially the sports you chose for them (and gyu being sungyeol’s tennis partner. please).

Other thoughts while I was reading:
The hilarity of Sungyeol not knowing anything about any sports besides his own--Hoya’s blond, amazing--The snark kills me--Sungyeol’s running monologue where misinterprets Hoya’s actions is great. I also like the way you wrote Sungyeol hung up on his “masculinity” but in a way that emphasizes how ridiculous his preoccupation is.

"Didn't see you there. Gonna take a shower?" I really cracked up at Sungyeol saying this since his crush is standing in the shower room in a towel and he’s been staring at him, lol.

The way that they repeatedly fail to admit their feelings and both just sort of “go for it” and awkwardly hook up seems in character, too and then in the aftermath Sungyeol’s “struck by logic and possibility and over-analysis”--Yes, this seems very true to his character.

tldr you wrote hoyeol, my day is officially great!