hero, sunggyu/woohyun (3/4)
anonymous
April 24 2013, 15:56:33 UTC
six
Sunggyu dreams of Nam Woohyun. Nam Woohyun the doctor that extracts the bullet and saves his life; Nam Woohyun is the nurse that stays by his bedside and monitors his heart rate in a chart that hangs at the end of his bed. Nam Woohyun is the person who tried to kill him; Nam Woohyun is the person who saves him.
In his nightmares, he stares into the mirror and sees himself but his name is Nam Woohyun and maybe he doesn’t exist. Maybe he’s not really awake.
When Sunggyu wakes up, it’s in his rented room, not the peach walls of the facility, and he’s always alone.
seven
Lee Sungyeol is the author of a book Sunggyu finds at the library. It’s a book on immortality.
Sunggyu buys a copy and he finishes it in a night. When he falls asleep that night, he dreams about Nam Woohyun, but he doesn’t see a face. Sunggyu can feel someone breathing against his ear, and he can hear someone playing the piano but there is never an image he can carry in his mind’s eyes to the next morning.
When he wakes up, Sunggyu writes a letter to his counselor:
Kim Myungsoo-sshi,
I read this book, entitled ‘The Truth about Immortality’, written by Dr. Lee Sungyeol and the entire book is on exactly as it says. They say the only measure of immortality is found in stories, passed on from person to person, generation to generation. There is a way to live forever, but it’s only through a memory.
hero, sunggyu/woohyun (4/4)
anonymous
April 24 2013, 16:01:20 UTC
one
“Do you trust me?” Woohyun’s voice is rough with emotion. It’s too dark to see, but Sunggyu thinks he could be crying.
“Woohyun, don’t be stupid and stop this. If we think it through, there will be a way out.”
“There’s no way out. Hyung, do you trust me?”
“Woohyun-”
“Sunggyu.”
Sunggyu is shocked into silence, and Woohyun kisses him. His cheeks are wet. Outside, the sirens are blaring. The police would find the hideout in minutes.
“Do you trust me?”
“Of course I do, you idiot. But maybe we should have robbed the bank in another city instead. Or chose a better hideout than this dump.”
Woohyun chuckles before kissing him harder, and pulls away swiftly. There’s a fumbling, and suddenly there’s something pressed against his temple. He speaks so fast Sunggyu thinks he misses half of it, but he clings onto Woohyun and tries to absorb it all. “Close your eyes. This is your way out, hyung. I promise you’ll wake up someday. We have enough money out there to take care of you. When you wake up, you will find me, okay? My name is Nam Woohyun, and I love you.”
There’s a single, loud click. The right side of his temple is cold, but Sunggyu’s senses are in overdrive and eyes are still closed. “My name is Nam Woohyun.”
Sunggyu realises what is happening the moment it happens, and there’s not enough to push Woohyun away, no time to scream but right as the gun goes off, there is just enough time for Sunggyu to open his eyes.
gosh *___* this was such an interesting read! i love the way you've structured this and how it all comes together in the end. it makes me wonder if sunggyu will end up finding him...
i meant to title the last part one, or what sunggyu cannot remember but i forgot to add the second part of the sentence in at the end /o\ while i was writing this, i never had the intention of having sunggyu ever find woohyun again
oh my GOD, I never thought my request would get filled. ;n;
ty anon!
I got suspicious when you titled the beginning 'two', but I was really fascinated by how the beginning and the end connects like a circuit. really smart and it builds up the tension. :o AND OMG THE ENDING, my heart started to break at My name is Nam Woohyun, and I love you.”
when you read your reply to the other anon that you never had the intention of hamster finding his tree again, I just had to read the entire story for the 5th time and gasp at every little detail.
how to write like you????
(and ha-ha [in the good way] at dr sungyeol's book, I can imagine him becoming deep and sentimental like that;;;)
LOL SORRY I DON'T KNOW HOW TO COMMENT but this was really beautiful and mysterious and sad and it have me a lot of feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels;;;;;
Re: hero, sunggyu/woohyun (4/4)
anonymous
April 25 2013, 07:11:34 UTC
look at the tears in my eyes, look anon what have you down... jesus it was so beautiful and well written... i have to admit i was afraid of the obligatory cliché, but this ending.. It's amazing how -one- little word can twist everything... no srsly i'm speechless.. please come un-anon and write more story for us ;n;<3
Sunggyu dreams of Nam Woohyun. Nam Woohyun the doctor that extracts the bullet and saves his life; Nam Woohyun is the nurse that stays by his bedside and monitors his heart rate in a chart that hangs at the end of his bed. Nam Woohyun is the person who tried to kill him; Nam Woohyun is the person who saves him.
In his nightmares, he stares into the mirror and sees himself but his name is Nam Woohyun and maybe he doesn’t exist. Maybe he’s not really awake.
When Sunggyu wakes up, it’s in his rented room, not the peach walls of the facility, and he’s always alone.
seven
Lee Sungyeol is the author of a book Sunggyu finds at the library. It’s a book on immortality.
Sunggyu buys a copy and he finishes it in a night. When he falls asleep that night, he dreams about Nam Woohyun, but he doesn’t see a face. Sunggyu can feel someone breathing against his ear, and he can hear someone playing the piano but there is never an image he can carry in his mind’s eyes to the next morning.
When he wakes up, Sunggyu writes a letter to his counselor:
Kim Myungsoo-sshi,
I read this book, entitled ‘The Truth about Immortality’, written by Dr. Lee Sungyeol and the entire book is on exactly as it says. They say the only measure of immortality is found in stories, passed on from person to person, generation to generation. There is a way to live forever, but it’s only through a memory.
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“Do you trust me?” Woohyun’s voice is rough with emotion. It’s too dark to see, but Sunggyu thinks he could be crying.
“Woohyun, don’t be stupid and stop this. If we think it through, there will be a way out.”
“There’s no way out. Hyung, do you trust me?”
“Woohyun-”
“Sunggyu.”
Sunggyu is shocked into silence, and Woohyun kisses him. His cheeks are wet. Outside, the sirens are blaring. The police would find the hideout in minutes.
“Do you trust me?”
“Of course I do, you idiot. But maybe we should have robbed the bank in another city instead. Or chose a better hideout than this dump.”
Woohyun chuckles before kissing him harder, and pulls away swiftly. There’s a fumbling, and suddenly there’s something pressed against his temple. He speaks so fast Sunggyu thinks he misses half of it, but he clings onto Woohyun and tries to absorb it all. “Close your eyes. This is your way out, hyung. I promise you’ll wake up someday. We have enough money out there to take care of you. When you wake up, you will find me, okay? My name is Nam Woohyun, and I love you.”
There’s a single, loud click. The right side of his temple is cold, but Sunggyu’s senses are in overdrive and eyes are still closed. “My name is Nam Woohyun.”
Sunggyu realises what is happening the moment it happens, and there’s not enough to push Woohyun away, no time to scream but right as the gun goes off, there is just enough time for Sunggyu to open his eyes.
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ty anon!
I got suspicious when you titled the beginning 'two',
but I was really fascinated by how the beginning
and the end connects like a circuit.
really smart and it builds up the tension. :o
AND OMG THE ENDING, my heart started to break
at My name is Nam Woohyun, and I love you.”
when you read your reply to the other anon
that you never had the intention of
hamster finding his tree again,
I just had to read the entire story
for the 5th time and gasp at every little detail.
how to write like you????
(and ha-ha [in the good way] at dr sungyeol's book,
I can imagine him becoming deep
and sentimental like that;;;)
LOL SORRY I DON'T KNOW HOW TO COMMENT
but this was really beautiful and mysterious and sad
and it have me a lot of feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels;;;;;
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please come un-anon and write more story for us ;n;<3
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I loved how you structured this. And how each member got brought in doing random professions.
How did Woohyun know Gyu would live through a headshot?!
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OMG... <3 <3 <3
This is just too perf...
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