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Aug 01, 2013 09:57

yes, it's finally here!

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op anonymous November 22 2013, 01:53:52 UTC
oh my god. anon. first of all, thank you so much for filling this, i didn't think anyone would ;;

secondly, WOW????????????????? i loved this so, so much. it was so perfect and so raw and so sexy: not just the sex scene but the entire thing, especially hoya's detailed fantasies and the way you conveyed through them the feeling of runaway, uncontrollable longing. i loved the way you interpreted "bad girl" as free-spirited rather than malicious, and the way you wrote dongwoo as a confident, take-charge young woman who was both aware of her own sex appeal and a little naive about its power. all the little details about the two of them as females were so perfect... hoya's pretty fringe that she kept pinned back (and the way it was something that dongwoo had noticed and admired when she didn't), the saturday underwear that dongwoo wore on thursday, the descriptions of the way dongwoo moved and used her body, etc etc etc. i especially loved hoya's fantasy of dongwoo kneeling on the bed--i could see it so clearly ;;;

idek what else to say. i just really loved this. thank you so so so much for writing it.

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Re: op anonymous November 22 2013, 08:19:59 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it! i couldn't write dongwoo as malicious bad,tbh ;; and i wrote all hoya's fantasizing while drunk,which probably helped with the detailedness aha i'm really glad you like it ;;

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