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Aug 01, 2013 09:57

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sweet as candy, she makes me randy (9/9) anonymous November 21 2013, 13:59:48 UTC
'My parents will probably be back soon,' Dongwoo commented off-handedly, 'And we should probably be dressed by then.' She tangled her fingers with Hoya's. 'But I just wanna lie like this a bit.'

Hoya hummed in reply, not wanted to let go of Dongwoo's warmth, not wanting to gvie up the gentle friction from Dongwoo's thigh- and definitely not wanting to think about what this all meant.

Hoya walked into school the next morning feeling slightly anxious and unsure, a feeling that lasted until she heard a yell of her nae and turned to see Dongwoo skipping up to her, throwing herselfin for a hug that had Hoya stumbling.

'How did you sleep? Did you sleep well? I slept so well,' Dongwoo said and gave her a grin. 'Thanks to you, of course.'

Hoya laughed, something inside of her relaxing. 'Hi.'

'Do you know something else that's great about getting with girls?' Dongwoo asked with a sly grin.

'What?'

Dongwoo leaned in, so her lips were by Hoya's ear, her arms lopped around her waist. 'There's no distance rule between girls, so I can be as close to my girlfriend as I want during school hours.'

Hoya felt something warm spread through her at the word 'girlfriend', a smile tugging at her lips. 'I thought you broke all the rules anyway,' she teased and Dongwoo let out a delighted laugh, pressing her lips swiftly to Hoya's, and Hoya laughed through the blush that followed, burying her face in Dongwoo's neck, glancing up only because Sungjong's surprised face was one rarely seen.

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op anonymous November 22 2013, 01:53:52 UTC
oh my god. anon. first of all, thank you so much for filling this, i didn't think anyone would ;;

secondly, WOW????????????????? i loved this so, so much. it was so perfect and so raw and so sexy: not just the sex scene but the entire thing, especially hoya's detailed fantasies and the way you conveyed through them the feeling of runaway, uncontrollable longing. i loved the way you interpreted "bad girl" as free-spirited rather than malicious, and the way you wrote dongwoo as a confident, take-charge young woman who was both aware of her own sex appeal and a little naive about its power. all the little details about the two of them as females were so perfect... hoya's pretty fringe that she kept pinned back (and the way it was something that dongwoo had noticed and admired when she didn't), the saturday underwear that dongwoo wore on thursday, the descriptions of the way dongwoo moved and used her body, etc etc etc. i especially loved hoya's fantasy of dongwoo kneeling on the bed--i could see it so clearly ;;;

idek what else to say. i just really loved this. thank you so so so much for writing it.

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Re: op anonymous November 22 2013, 08:19:59 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it! i couldn't write dongwoo as malicious bad,tbh ;; and i wrote all hoya's fantasizing while drunk,which probably helped with the detailedness aha i'm really glad you like it ;;

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Re: sweet as candy, she makes me randy (9/9) anonymous November 24 2013, 22:15:17 UTC
not op but omg i seriously loved this ;u; i don't usually read yadong but this was perfect

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chanyeolanda November 26 2013, 18:29:37 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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