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captain_molly January 24 2015, 16:56:39 UTC
This was amazing! You created such a rich, fascinating universe and spun a beautiful, touching story. Fantastic job!

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cherie_morte January 25 2015, 17:26:06 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really tickled that you thought I did a good job world building. :#)

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cherie_morte January 25 2015, 17:26:48 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story. :D

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chellexxx January 25 2015, 00:26:16 UTC
this is a lovely fairytale, of magic and romance, i loved it.

I love, love, love your Danneel, she is awesome, hope she finds love too

thank you for sharing

xxx

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cherie_morte January 25 2015, 17:27:57 UTC
:D Yay! I'm so happy to hear it. Thanks very much for reading and taking the time to let me know what you thought.

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fourtenpm January 25 2015, 06:30:17 UTC
This is such a fun story, heartbreaking, but fun, mostly.

Really liked the josh and Jensen's relationship, because everybody knows j and j love each other. And Josh really thought Jared put a spell on his brother, and they teased each other and they supported each other. Oh my heart!

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cherie_morte January 25 2015, 17:29:52 UTC
I can't tell you how thrilled I was when I got this comment last night! Josh and Jensen's relationship was one of my favorite things in this, so I'm just really happy you picked that out as something you enjoyed. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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fourtenpm January 25 2015, 20:19:30 UTC
Just so that you know, the part that I liked the most was when Lord Beaver almost said something about Jensen, and Josh turned on him all ferocious, and Jared realized how the king can be such a dangerous being. So rich in detail in such a short scene!

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cherie_morte January 26 2015, 01:21:33 UTC
Thank you thank you thank you so much. I can't tell you how much those words mean to me. <3333

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legion11 January 25 2015, 15:48:12 UTC
That was awesome!

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cherie_morte January 25 2015, 17:31:20 UTC
You are awesome! :D

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