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Supernatural: When It's Over

Apr 24, 2013 09:12

Title: When It's Over
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, background Sam/Amelia
Rating: R for some sexuality, mentions of past suicidal thoughts, past attempted underage (age not specified and it's only a kiss), and (canon, temporary) character death
Word Count: 3,839
Author’s Note: So this was supposed to be written for insmallpackages for the ( Read more... )

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Comments 86

cindyls1969 April 24 2013, 13:51:13 UTC

This made me sad and then happy. Dean giving himself to Sam out of love and guilt only to find out that they've both been feeling the same way for so long. Sigh....these wonderful men....

cherie_morte April 24 2013, 13:52:47 UTC

They are wonderful--alas, communication is *not their strong point*. I'm really glad you enjoyed my fic, thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

meesasometimes April 24 2013, 13:53:03 UTC

I am so glad you posted this :) I'm going to insert it as episode 11.5, right where it belongs

because he has enough trouble not wanting to die without giving him a perfect place to do it.

that line is perfection and made my heart twinge

cherie_morte April 24 2013, 15:48:04 UTC

:D Hahah, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! That was one of the few lines in this fic I was really, really happy with, so I'm super pleased that you picked it out.

colls April 24 2013, 14:01:34 UTC

CORNFLAKES!

Fantastic, angsty make-up with a dash of schmoop --- I love it.

cherie_morte April 24 2013, 15:49:16 UTC

The cornflakes line was an after thought. It almost wasn't there and then I was like, WHAT THE HELL CHERIE, OF COURSE DEAN ADDS CORNFLAKES TO HIS GROCERY LIST SO HE CAN PEE IN THEM, WHO EVEN ARE YOU?

Ahem. Thank you for reading and commenting, my pet! <333

quickreaver April 24 2013, 14:09:38 UTC

I think you've nailed exactly why Sam didn't look. And Dean's hurt over it all. And then ... all the making up. :D

cherie_morte April 24 2013, 15:53:08 UTC

Oh, I'm so so glad that it felt that way for you! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to let me know what you thought. <3

mekina April 24 2013, 14:34:55 UTC

This is fantastic. I love how it starts, fucked up and one big Winchester misunderstanding. And then there is the conversation that I wish, wish, WISH we'd had in canon, about why Sam didn't look for Dean. Everything I've been wanting.

Wow. So much love for this.

cherie_morte April 24 2013, 15:55:12 UTC

I still believe we will get this conversation in canon (erm, with less focus on incest...), but if not, I'm really happy I could supply it for you. :D Thank you SO MUCH for reading and commenting to let me know you enjoyed it.