Supernatural: Here's Looking at You

[cherie_morte]

Title: Here's Looking at You
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17 for Explicit Sexual Content (deflowering of virgins abounds!), Underage (Sam is 16, Dean is 31, also implied that they were together when Sam was 16 and Dean was 21), Suicidal Thoughts and Intentions, Alcohol Use, and Language
Word Count: 8,880
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[legion11]

Wow! It was really complicated, but you make it work. Good!

[cherie_morte]

Really glad it worked for you! Thanks so much for reading.

[stormcloude]

Wow. I was pretty much bawling through the first half of this, grieving for Sam right along with Dean. Thanks for sharing.

[cherie_morte]

I'm so glad! I mean, not glad you were crying...but glad you felt Dean's pain. I tried really hard to make that stand out. Thanks so much for reading!

[enlacarretera]

That was just amazing. I'm so in love with the whole idea of the time travel, and I love the angst, the sex, the dialogues. It's so much of Supernatural in its good time in this fic. I really think the show could have been epic if someone would've tried. This thought always make me feel a little sad and nostalgic about it, because it's not what used to be, but oh my, what a fandom we have, what a story they keep between the lines.

Thank you so much :).

[cherie_morte]

Thank you so much, I'm really happy that you enjoyed my fic! I'm glad it threw you back to the glory days of Show. ;)

[lyryk]

OMFG, I have had older!Dean/16yo!Sam in my head for days; so excited about this fic!! *goes to read*

ETA: So, wow, that was amazing. All that grief in the beginning, fuck, that was hard to read (in the best way). I really loved 16 year old Sam with all his stupid lovely wisdom, and my heart broke a little for Dean when he kept telling himself he'd fucked Sam up. And Death! With the chocolates! And with the fixing things up! This is so epic and so good. ♥

[cherie_morte]

I am so shamefully into that. XD Glad you were, too.

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy that the angst was hard to get through because I tried really hard to make it potent. And I'm super happy the characters worked for you, from guilty!Dean to teenage!Sammy and ESPECIALLY Death. I was so worried I'd fuck him up--I've never written him before and he is SO AMAZING on Show.

[lyryk]

ME TOO.

Death is such a FABULOUS character. And imo you got him ~perfectly. I could totally see him feeling generous because the chocolate had put him in such a good mood. *g*

[lilithrain]

Man that was complex but damn I enjoyed it. ♥ Brilliant piece. Adding this to my mems.

[cherie_morte]

I'm so happy it made sense--I was worried I was getting more complex than my own ability to keep it sensible. XD Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you thought. I'm absolutely flattered you enjoyed it this much. :)