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katsheswims September 30 2011, 02:33:33 UTC
This was great! Awesome job! There were several times where it could have ended on a tragic (or at least bittersweet) note, but I'm glad it didn't!

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cherie_morte September 30 2011, 20:11:20 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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killabeez September 30 2011, 03:35:23 UTC
Wow. This is absolutely gorgeous. There were a few points where I had to stop reading, and considered not finishing the story because it was just too painful. But I couldn't seem to stop myself-and the ending was so, so worth it. Sam telling Dean that he was the love of his life made me cry. I never cry. But it really felt true, here, and Sam's courage broke my heart. So beautiful. I'm really without words to say how much I loved this.

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cherie_morte September 30 2011, 20:12:53 UTC
Meep! I am so very glad you did keep on going! I'm really touched that the story was able to make you cry and the fact that it felt true is just--thank you so much! For someone without words, your words sure made me blush. <3333

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sagetan September 30 2011, 03:51:34 UTC
Oh man, this was an absolutely lovely read. SO MUCH LOVE. *___* I adore the progression of their relationship and Sam's head space, all the lovely tender moments between them and how their lives suck and there is no perfect ending, but everything turns out exactly right anyway.

I love how you wrote Sam's dream world, the fuzzy malleability of reality and how it was populated by the shadow of people he used to know. And ADAM THE PIZZA DELIVERY GUY, OMG.

Another thing I'm super in love with is the way you wrote the hallucinations, so intense and chilling. Sam zoning in and out of reality, his conversations with Lucifer, feeling as if he's on fire... Trying to convince Dean and Bobby that Hell isn't that bad, really, while thinking he's missing a leg. Whoa, Sam. There is little in this world I love more than quality Sam whump, and this delivered in spades. Saaaaaaam <33333 ( ... )

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cherie_morte September 30 2011, 23:02:10 UTC
Eeeee! I am so happy you liked the ending, BB! You were so kind with all the other bits I sent you, I was dreadfully worried you'd read the last 10K and be like, "LOL, well this took a swan dive in quality..."

ADAM THE PIZZA DELIVERY GUY! \o/ Once it has been Seen, it cannot be Unseen.

I am so bad to poor Sam. BUT HE JUST WOOBIES THE BEST. Also then it means I get to write this kind of Dean, which is my favorite kind. All the protectiveness and sad-because-Sam's-sad. Plus, his fireman's uniform was all thanks to you. That suspenders line in the last part was just residue from all the squee that dishwashing piece inspired in me. XD

I'm really just so happy that you enjoyed seeing this story out, babe. Thanks again for claiming me and for all your support!

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morganoconner September 30 2011, 04:55:18 UTC
Oh, God. There aren't words. *tries and fails to breathe properly*

I love this so damn much. I cried at least three times while reading, my heart was shattered, and then that ending...that perfect, beautiful, glorious ending...

I love you. I love everything you choose to be. You are amazing.

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cherie_morte September 30 2011, 20:14:03 UTC
Three times? That might be a new record! \o/

Thank you, sweetheart! I love you, too. I am really really happy that you enjoyed reading this fic. ♥

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smalltrolven September 30 2011, 05:54:00 UTC
Wonderful, I really loved this story. Sam was so brave and broken and patient. Dean was so devoted and despairing. The dream world was really well done, how Sam's memories supplied characters, and the hallucinations seemed just like I'd always imagined they'd be for him. Oh and you made me cry in a couple spots too, thanks for such a great story.

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cherie_morte September 30 2011, 20:16:56 UTC
Thanks for such a great comment! I'm really relieved that the dreamworld was well done for you, because I was worried at times and had to work really hard on it. Sorry about the tears, BB! *hands tissues*

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