Fic: A Surprise Visit (Ron/Scorpius)

Nov 06, 2014 15:19

Title: A Surprise Visit
Characters/Pairings: Ron/Scorpius
Rating: Teen
Summary: Ron receives a surprise visit at work
Word Count: 2365
Series: Daddy & Pretty Boy
Dedicated to everyone reading this series! I hope y’all enjoy this part. <3

A Surprise Visit )

all my fanfiction, series: daddy and pretty boy, pairing: ron/scorpius, 2014 fanfic, fandom: harry potter, rating: teen

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inell November 6 2014, 22:21:17 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it! It means a lot that you like Ron, too. It's always such fun aging the characters up and trying to figure out how they might be in 20+ years. I'm glad you feel this is believable for Ron! Also glad you liked Harry's reaction and everything else! <3

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my_thestral November 6 2014, 23:10:00 UTC
I must admit that when I read the title my mind went straight to the gutter. ;) Buuuuut - that doesn't mean I'm disappointed in any way! Ron has really matured and Scorpius is sooo adorable running straight to him, even wearing his clothes (what a blow to Malfoyian sense of all things style and proper!), just to stop the catastrophe of Ron giving him up upon Rose's nagging. That's just... sweet. That says "I love you!!!" with big fucking letters better than any neon sign would. :)
And of course Ron won't give him up, honestly, a Gryffindor there! And there's hardly anything worse than a Gryffindor in love. Just look at Lavender Brown.;)
And Harry continues to be my hero with such an attitude. He gets a cookie for being so intuitive-accepting-inquisitive-amused. ;)

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inell November 6 2014, 23:14:59 UTC
What a lovely comment! *bounces* I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Scorpius mutters that he isn't adorable and sweet, silly Muggle woman, but we know better. LOL I'm really happy you liked Harry and Ron and Scorpius and aren't disappointed!

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lesemma November 7 2014, 01:00:58 UTC
You know I'm a shitty commenter/reviewer, but I have been reading this series and have to say this is my favorite yet! I want to read about dinner with the Potters, and I can't wait to read a Hermione/Ron/Scorpius interaction. Loved Harry in this! And Rose, even off camera, was lovely.

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inell November 7 2014, 01:04:46 UTC
Nah, you aren't! I am guilty of reading and not commenting, too. However, I'm glad you've been reading this series and enjoy it! I'm also pleased this is a favorite part. It played out in my head the other day but I can't write until Thursdays usually, so it had to stay there until I could write it. anyway, thank you so much! :D

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nia_kantorka November 8 2014, 13:39:37 UTC
Have read it immediately but had no time to comment properly.

I love everything here. Ron being protective and understanding, Harry being such a great friend, Scorpius acting very Un-Malfoy-ish but showing us all how much he loves Ron. Awww, I think he needs cookies and hot sex as a reward. :D

I can't wait to see what is happening next. What will we get then. Dinner with the Potters? A confrontation between best friends and father and daughter? Or Dinner with Hermione, Blaise and these two? They are adorable and my second favourite HP_pairing now. Thank you, thank you, thank you, Inell!!!

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inell November 8 2014, 13:43:14 UTC
Hee! Yay! I was wondering if you'd had a chance to read yet. I knew you've been busy. <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it, of course! It means a lot that you're still loving the verse and wanting more. Also pleased you liked how this scene played out. They're definitely one of my favorite slash ships at the moment, that's for sure. I thank you for embracing them and enjoying them in a way that inspires me to keep writing them!

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