Fic: A Modern Woman (Charlie/Hermione)

[inell]

Title: A Modern Woman
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/Hermione
Rating: Teen
Summary: Hermione can take care of herself
Word Count: 1500
_snitchbitch’s prompt: Charlie doesn't seem to understand that Hermione is a modern woman, able to take care of herself.

Comments

[lzod]

*giggle*

[inell]

Thank you!

[thimble_kiss]

I loved their dynamic and dialogue here, it really shoots sparks! Great job with both Hermione and Charlie and their conflicting motivations; you made me understand and cheer for them both, and very happy to see them work it out in such perfect accord. Their last few lines back-and-forth were particularly happy-making - what a lovely ending. :)

[inell]

Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm really happy you enjoyed the dynamic and conflict. <333

[_snitchbitch]

Oh my. It's.. perfect! The bickering was beautiful, Charlie was as gorgeous as ever (you've kind of created the perfect man there, you know), and Hermione's come back about HER apartment and breakfast was a lovely touch.

Thank you! I adored it :)

[inell]

YAY! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it fit what you had in mind. <333 I'm happy you liked the bickering and Hermione's attitude. ♥

[truetomorrow]

I looooooooove these two! What a sweet, sexy, Charlie <3
It's funny, reading this now--I actually started a Charlie/Hermione fic earlier this week that takes place in a bar... where Charlie "rescues" Hermione from a drunk. Maybe one day I'll actually finish it xD

[inell]

Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. And you need to finish that fic! Hardly anyone posts Hermione fic around LJ these days! :D