Fic: Time for Tea (Ron/Scorpius)

Oct 21, 2014 19:24

Title: Time for Tea
Pairing: Ron/Scorpius
Summary: Scorpius introduces Ron to his mother.
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 3155
A/N: This is for anyone enjoying this little series. I’m having fun writing it. Hope some of y’all enjoy!
Series: #6 in Daddy & Pretty Boy

Time for Tea )

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my_thestral October 22 2014, 09:09:59 UTC
Once again - lovely to the bone! :)
I love it how Ron is the insecure one and how he keeps on digging (Ron at his best, "subtle" is obviously something you put on a bread instead of Nutella, he's never heard of the word!) and poor Scorpius, who's clearly thought about it and has it all worked out, is grilled like a chicken wing. I really like it how he gets all Malfoyian on Ron, planning their old age together and clearly Ron has even issues coping with "now, today".:) And I love protective mothers! I've never written Astoria, but when I incorporate Narcissa into the story, she's always protective as fuck and I think your accepting Astoria with a subtle potential to be menacing is fantastic (you can just see how she has Draco wrapped around her little finger at home, making him think he's in charge - yeah, right, you poor sod!)
Oh, mother of god - grandchildren! I never even thought of that, why didn't I think of it? Now I have to think of a prompt going that way!:D
Thank you for this, one can feel the affection behind the effort you put in this story, I have a feeling you're enjoying it just like we do! :) And now I'm dying to see for how long will Draco be hospitalized when he figures out who his future "son in law" is... :D St. Mungo, here he comes! ;)

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inell October 23 2014, 13:11:00 UTC
What a lovely comment! I'm so pleased you and Nia are reading/enjoying this series, so it allows me to indulge myself and write more of it. LOL I'm pleased that Astoria was good in your opinion and that you like the dynamic between Ron/Scorpius and that you could feel their growing affection :D:D

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my_thestral October 23 2014, 13:38:39 UTC
Totally deserved compliments, hon! I'm kind of hoping you'll do the introduction to Draco next (or somewhere down the road, if Nia has a better idea, of course), but I don't know how to word this one properly. I'm definitely expecting friction, there could be fraction, but I hope not an all out war (though perhaps there is some room for angst in this story, either on the Ron/Scorpius axis or Scorpius/Draco one - I hope Nia doesn't start throwing pans and pots at me for making stupid suggestions!) :) In any event - your story, your rules! I'm looking forward to it! *hugs you happily and jumps up and down in happy expectation like a 3-year-old*

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inell October 23 2014, 13:52:01 UTC
Oh, there's definitely going to be some friction in upcoming parts but it might not be why/where you expect! I won't spoil you but just trust me. I already have a few ideas for things in future parts. I just like mixing in a bit of smut (as I generally work in relationship development with smutty times) with the progression of stuff. Nia's next prompt to me is about auror robes smut so that'll likely be where I focus for a next part. I have two things in mind for after that, and some of the friction will happen in one of those. <3

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my_thestral October 23 2014, 13:58:51 UTC
Yey! *dances around the office happily like an Indian* Oh, you, tease you! You probably have the whole story already mapped up/written and you're just posting chapter by chapter, admit it! :D
Nah, I'm really happy that you always find a way to incorporate our - very versatile - prompts into your story and make it into this wholesome complex story with a whole universe of lovely tiny details. I'm happily intrigued now! :)

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