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inell

Fic: Abandoned (Kirk/McCoy)

Oct 12, 2009 11:56

Title: Abandoned
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: Any Age
Summary: Jim & Bones are lost
Word Count: 775
ABC Challenge: A- Abandoned for d8rkmessngr

( Abandoned )

all my fanfiction, pairing: kirk/mccoy, rating: any age, 2009 fanfic, challenge: abc 2009, fandom: star trek xi

Comments 14

sangueuk October 12 2009, 17:02:20 UTC

Oh nooo! I want to know they'll be alright!

Very tense, I enjoyed this.

inell November 30 2009, 21:38:00 UTC

Thank you! ♥

secretsolitaire October 12 2009, 17:48:53 UTC

I love how these two are BFF's and kick each other's butts when they need it. *smishes them*

inell November 30 2009, 21:38:18 UTC

Thank you! ♥

thistlerose October 12 2009, 18:09:50 UTC

Love the tension and the uncertainty of the situation. And yeah, I want to know what happens next! Did Weller set them up? Are they walking into a trap? Will there be kisses in the rain?

inell November 30 2009, 21:38:39 UTC

Thank you! ♥

easilymused1956 October 12 2009, 19:27:36 UTC

You really did 'abandon' us at the end. Seriously, though, this is a great little story. Lots of tension and just a bit of funny.

I'd definitely read more.

Renee

inell November 30 2009, 21:39:00 UTC

Thank you! ♥

d8rkmessngr October 14 2009, 13:46:53 UTC

At first, I squee because it was an inell fic.

Then I squee when I realized it was my prompt from the ABC.

Finally, I squee because it was just rich with the Bones/Jim banter and dynamic you're so good at.

Of course, I would love more (how they get rescued, how was their 'trek', any ouches along the way) but I'm just greedy that way. LOL

Overall, I give this three squees.

:)

inell November 30 2009, 21:39:30 UTC

Thank you! ♥