Fic: Bourbon & Blood (Kirk/McCoy)

[inell]

Title: Bourbon & Blood
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: Teen
Summary: Jim can't explain, not without sounding like an idiot
Word Count: 1800
A/N: Written for this prompt

Comments

[prongsy]

Teehee! I had this particular prompted tracked, so I kept seeing all these alerts in my gmail notifier on the right hand side and was like, "Not now, mail! I'm reading Inell's latest fic.". Irony of ironies.... it was alerting me to your posting of this fic in the meme. ^_^

Now to read!

[prongsy]

Gorgeous. Absolutely, breathtakingly stunning!

Perfect fill of the prompt. Hell, above and beyond!

I love Jim's jealousy, his inability to fight Bones (until reflex took over, of course), and his possessive, yet slightly unsure attitude. He wants to have a right to be mad, to claim Bones as Bones has claimed him, but he's scared and... it's just beautifully written. You can feel his desperation at the thought of losing the only thing, only person, he'd ever allowed himself to want or given himself over to. It hurts to be that vulnerable, to give someone everything and yet think they don't return the favor. So... poignant and awesome and brilliant and one of these days your fics are going to make me run out of superlatives. ^_^

[inell]

Thank you, hon! Glad you enjoyed it.

[blcwriter]

Best last line EVER, just about. Fabulous.

[inell]

Thank you! ♥

[jtav]

Love how petulant Kirk is at the beginning. Great job, as always!

[inell]

Thank you! ♥

[beautyandbanana]

I loved the title!

[inell]

Thank you! ♥

[celandineb]

Jealous!Jim is so so so good, I have to say. *ponders whether Bones might actually have incited that jealousy deliberately*

[inell]

Thank you! ♥