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Fic: Observation (Uhura, Gaila, Kirk/McCoy)

Jul 20, 2009 12:17

Title: Observation
Pairing: Uhura, Gaila, Kirk/McCoy
Rating: Adult
Summary: The sudden silence is immediately suspicious
Word Count: 1390
A/N: Based on a prompt from syredronning

( Observation )

rating: adult, character: nyota uhura, all my fanfiction, pairing: kirk/mccoy, character: gaila, 2009 fanfic, fandom: star trek xi

Comments 47

jennytork July 20 2009, 17:26:29 UTC

Now this, I really enjoyed! I love watching outsider perspectives on things.

celandineb July 20 2009, 17:40:41 UTC

Mmmm. I could almost wonder if Kirk chose that room on purpose, for the chance of discovery. Really, really hot the way you were portraying both women's reactions.

abigail89 July 20 2009, 17:41:54 UTC

I love your Gaila. She's got this Luna-like quality to her, no glossing over events around her. She tells it like it is. I like that.

Lovely.

sangueuk July 20 2009, 17:42:30 UTC

I am all choked up here - this is amazing and so HOT! How do you do it? How do you find a new perspective so often?

I love it when McCoy calls him darling. *sighs*

Beautiful, as ever.

zerrah July 20 2009, 17:48:48 UTC

Wow, that was hot!

“You are so old-fashioned, Nyota. It is sweet.” She reaches over and pets Nyota’s head, which makes Nyota swat her shoulder. XD I <3 Gaila.

I wanna see those pretty lips wrapped around my cock. Then, maybe I’ll fuck you. If you’re a good boy. Damn.

I like how Uhura had a crush on him...I could actually see that happening. McCoy seems driven and disciplined, a lot like Spock and even Uhura in some ways.