WTR #20: Excursion (Hermione/Teddy)

[inell]

Title: Excursion (Worth the Risk #20)
Pairing: Hermione/Teddy
Summary: Hermione decides how she wants to spend her free time
Word Count: 4350
Rating: Teen
Betas: florahart & heather11483
Note: This contains spoilers for Deathly Hallows. Previous chapters of Worth the Risk can be found here .

Comments

[mrsquizzical]

i was getting all achy in the chest over ron and her splitting up, and that kind of jealous feeling when imagining him chasing another woman. i really felt it along with her.

but this is lovely. really so lovely.

[inell]

Thank you! That's such a lovely compliment, hon. ♥

[sweet_lemmon]

*takes a long sigh*

:)

[inell]

Thank you!

[secretsolitaire]

Eee, kissing in the rain in the lane. :-D So romantic. ♥

[inell]

Hee! I'm such a sap. I sighed when Teddy told me to write that. LOL -isn't crazy...really >_>-

[whimsicalmuse]

Your writing is so wonderfully character driven, and no step seems false for any of them. I like the exploration of Hermione's feelings of self-doubt when she compares herself to Mel as well as her slow acceptance of Teddy into her life by taking him to the pub. And the rain kiss. *sighs happily*

[inell]

Thank you! I'm really glad you like the characterizations and enjoy the story!

[drcjsnider]

Ugh... I'd hate all the people staring and talking too. I mean how in the world is it anyone's business, except their own and their families? I do like to see Hermione loosening up a bit about being seen with Teddy. Great job, as always.

[inell]

I know. Unfortunately, that's how RL is too often. People are nosy and gossip about stuff that isn't any of their business. I'm glad you enjoyed it!