Fic: Brother (Susan Bones)

[inell]

Title: Brother
Rating: Any Age
Character: Susan Bones
Summary: Susan finally understands
Word Count: 330
Day 21 31_october_days

Comments

[ex_pixystick865]

It’s not until she’s fifteen and Cedric Diggory (handsome, smart, charming) is dead, allegedly killed by He Who Must Not Be Named, that she finally understands.

I really loved that line. This was so sad and sweet and insightful. I love how you made such a huge impact in so few words. Really lovely, hon! ♥

[inell]

Thank you so much, sweetie! ♥

[gestaltrose]

With a determined set of her shoulders, she gets a butterbeer from the refrigerator and joins her father.

I'm so impressed by your ability to move me with so few words. I was misty at the end. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Rose

[inell]

Thank you, hon! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it!

[austenrowling]

Very sad. I like you you compared Susan and Cedric to siblings, as they belonged in the same house at Hogwarts.

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

[inell]

Thank you! I always love receiving your comments for these. I'm having so much fun writing these little gen fics that I might have to do my own challenge for them next month for myself.

I'm glad you enjoyed Dung and Orla. Especially glad you liked how Susan went and 'got' it *Grin*

[inell]

Also, I know what you mean about Zach. I've got a special fondness for him after playing him at Leaky. I almost chose him as my second in SHH, but I worried he'd end up too much like Leaky Zach and that someone else might be able to do more with him in this premise. Now, I'm a bit worried about the poor boy! Haha!

[druidspell]

I loved this.
And since I just came back from a funeral today, it brought tears to my eyes (and sent them streaming down my face).

[inell]

Thank you! I'm touched that it connected with you like that. ♥