Fic: Words (Hermione/Viktor)

Apr 11, 2006 15:33

Title: Words
Pairing: Hermione/Viktor
Rating: Any Age
Summary: Viktor doesn’t understand some words
Word Count: 840
ABC Challenge #32: O - Overhear for gm_weasley

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all my fanfiction, rating: any age, fandom: harry potter, pairing: hermione/viktor, 2006 fanfic, challenge: abc 2006

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lorraineblue April 12 2006, 05:45:22 UTC
*Sigh* I feel all mushy after reading this. You have made me happy, hon, you have no idea how much I loved it. As usual I'm finding quite difficult to pick the lines I liked more. You know I loved even the final period, but I'll try my best.

“This vord makes you sad,” Viktor observed quietly. “I am sorry I make you unhappy. I neffer vish to be making you feel bad. Awww, that was just so lovely. If I understand Hermione correctly, I think she was trying to remain calmed and steady, but dear Viktor knows better and noticed her anger and sadness. I love when he does that, I mean seeing right into her.

I vont to practice my hexing on that boy but I vonted to be knowing for certain that vord was vrong.” Be my guest, darling. Definitely he's wonderful, he wants to defend her, but he's a perfect gentleman to the end, he wanted to be sure about what he was doing.

“I do not understand,” Viktor finally admitted. “You are smartest girl I effer meet and good vit magic. Vy is that vrong? Blood is not important ven it is same beneath skin.” *Dies and drools* Just when I thought he couldn't be better. Hermione, if you don't keep this man, I'll do it. “I do not like that vord. It makes you sad and it is vrong. I vill not listen to him or others use it about you.” *Dies again*

“Ven I hex him, I vill not be caught,” he whispered confidentially as a mischievous smile crossed his thin lips. Sneaky, adorable Viktor... I love a man like that.

The little kiss at the end, and the reaction of both, was a very nice touch. I see the awkwardness and the uncertainty of the first stages, but there's definitely something real between them.

Perfect gentleman, sneaky and protective Viktor... *sighs* You made my day, sweetie. Thank you so much for this.

Love you.

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inell April 12 2006, 22:51:59 UTC
Yay for mushy. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading, hon!

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