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indysaur

RPS Fic: Roads Well Traveled (1/2)

Mar 14, 2008 09:05

Roads Well Traveled
SPN RPS: Jared/Jensen
Rating: R
10,552 words.
AU Fic. Jared's known Jensen since he was born. Jensen's his best friend. They share a house. It's not uncomplicated. Thanks to
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fic, jared/jensen

Comments 12

pekover March 14 2008, 20:18:19 UTC

I'm hooked! I really like the understatement, and the tension, and, strangely, the landscaping.

But Part Two? I've clicked and I've clicked, and nothing happens! If Part Two is available, I want it...help?

pekover March 14 2008, 21:15:52 UTC

Oops, nevermind, I found the link on your LJ homepage. So, really, just...good work!

indysaur March 14 2008, 23:22:17 UTC

Woops! That was definitely my mistake. Thanks for bringing it to my attention, and I'm glad you found the rest despite my thoughtlessness. And thank you for reading!

Also, your icon is EXCELLENT. Is that your dog? He/she's BEAUTIFUL. Um. Ha ha. I have a Lab, too.

estei March 14 2008, 21:02:05 UTC

I love you like crazy. Also, I kind of like this story. I was just at Costco today, and apparently the last friday of March Break is even worse than a Saturday. I was almost in two accidents in the parking lot and was assaulted three, yes three, times in the store with shopping carts.

"Yeah," Jared lies. "Hand to God." I love this so much. I love all of your dialogue, always, but in every chapter there's a line that just stops me.

indysaur March 14 2008, 23:24:50 UTC

I love you. Your Costco experience sounds AWFUL. UGH. I REALLY do not appreciate people who race around with their carts like they are BEING TIMED. Um. Ha ha. I actually didn't think my feeling were so strong on inconsiderate cart-wielders, but there you go.

I liked Costco, but it is useless to me now because I live alone! The one near here is full to the brim with, like, frat guys.

estei March 15 2008, 00:56:57 UTC

My personal Costco is populated with women who wear leather coats in varying shades of black ten months out of the year and drive SUVs. And likewise, I only go when my mom is up and she turns it into an epic experience involving a cart which overfloweth.

indysaur March 15 2008, 01:04:56 UTC

Ha ha, oh man, do I know the exact type of woman you're talking about.

The worst part is, sometimes I go out of habit and come home with, like, a BUSHEL of bananas and a tub of mixed nuts and everything either rots or goes stale. And then my house smells GREAT.

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fanofsuper March 15 2008, 03:25:29 UTC

Such a different point of view to have Jared be the one that can cook & be good working with his hands....

Costco & weekends definitely don't mix (unless you go when it 1st opens)

Off to read part 2 now

layne67 March 19 2008, 05:06:47 UTC

Omg *hyperventilates*

I love this so much.

*rushes off to read pt 2*

paintmydays October 17 2009, 03:15:19 UTC

Harley's nosing around, curiously mouthing a clod of dirt and when Jared whistles sharply at him, he grabs it and runs. Settles a safe distance away and swallows it up easily.
I love the vivid details.