This is so very good, it comes out beautifully...I love the contrast between Nathan and Peter running through the whole thing...the bits I like seem to change every time I read it. I'm quite attached to Claude's guilt over wishing Peter had the flavours of his brother that would have saved him now.
no acknowledgment that this might be about two people.
Which is fair, since it isn't.
Just one.
And this...which is lovely and painful!
They both come through perfectly...you can really see Nathan now, all the little tiny reactions and looks add to it all. Great stuff!
Without doubt I do! I'm horribly fickle! Though I'm perfect happy to see grumpy Claude at any point in time...more grumpy Claude please (and possibly amused Claude or obnoxious Claude too, both of which are good.)
It's great like this now, there's a lovely see-saw between Claude and Nathan. I was totally happy to help, no problem at all...
Lol and about the above comment... They wouldn't dare put what I've written on television! Though maybe this is why they can't have them meet in the series...all the testosterone and inappropriate fight!sex would be unavoidable... *dreams crushed*
They're all variations of grumpy, and each of them has special merits of their own!
How's it coming?
It's pretty much finished 4000 odd words of arguing and hitting each other and gratuitous fight sex...and umm not a whole lot else. I'm going to run through it later and probably put it up tomorrow.
It's true, even HBO would probably run screaming from half the stuff we'd quite like to see. Then they'd hide in their offices and be unreachable by phone...
no acknowledgment that this might be about two people.
Which is fair, since it isn't.
Just one.
And this...which is lovely and painful!
They both come through perfectly...you can really see Nathan now, all the little tiny reactions and looks add to it all. Great stuff!
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You put the "fic" back into "fickle" ;) Just kidding! I'm immensely grateful for your help and feedback with this.
I'm quite attached to Claude's guilt over wishing Peter had the flavours of his brother that would have saved him now.
Yeah, that just sort of snuck in there when I was writing (no design). Happy to hear that it works.
They both come through perfectly...you can really see Nathan now, all the little tiny reactions and looks add to it all.
Thank you - really appreciate the help, with that point especially, and I'm glad if I've managed to haul it up a bit.
Cheers! :)
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Without doubt I do! I'm horribly fickle! Though I'm perfect happy to see grumpy Claude at any point in time...more grumpy Claude please (and possibly amused Claude or obnoxious Claude too, both of which are good.)
It's great like this now, there's a lovely see-saw between Claude and Nathan. I was totally happy to help, no problem at all...
Lol and about the above comment... They wouldn't dare put what I've written on television! Though maybe this is why they can't have them meet in the series...all the testosterone and inappropriate fight!sex would be unavoidable... *dreams crushed*
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Yeah, I have to write more of all of those. <3 Claude.
They wouldn't dare put what I've written on television!
We are all the poorer for that :(
maybe this is why they can't have them meet in the series...all the testosterone and inappropriate fight!sex would be unavoidable... *dreams crushed*
Tim Kring so needs someone to show him the error of his ways.
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We are all the poorer for that
Ah you say that now but you haven't seen it yet!
If we got half the things we asked for put into shows....maybe if they were to meet accidentally when Kring wasn't looking?
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He really is. And bless him, almost all the faces are grumpy ;)
Ah you say that now but you haven't seen it yet!
Well, I'm looking forward to it :) How's it coming?
If we got half the things we asked for put into shows....
Then every episode would be rated NC-17 and not even HBO would show it ;)
maybe if they were to meet accidentally when Kring wasn't looking?
Works for me!
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They're all variations of grumpy, and each of them has special merits of their own!
How's it coming?
It's pretty much finished 4000 odd words of arguing and hitting each other and gratuitous fight sex...and umm not a whole lot else. I'm going to run through it later and probably put it up tomorrow.
It's true, even HBO would probably run screaming from half the stuff we'd quite like to see. Then they'd hide in their offices and be unreachable by phone...
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*g* Absolutely.
It's pretty much finished 4000 odd words of arguing and hitting each other and gratuitous fight sex...and umm not a whole lot else.
This makes me SO HAPPY :) The only thing better than waiting for a Claude/Nathan fic is waiting for a long Claude/Nathan fic :)
It's true, even HBO would probably run screaming from half the stuff we'd quite like to see.
Tragically.
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