Safe - Chapter 17

[indyhat]

Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating: PG
Word count: 2,100ish.
Spoilers: AU; nothing here, really.
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
Summary: Holocaust-era Heroes
A/N: Goodness, the word-count runs away with me when people start talking! This chapter is for

Comments

[visiblemarket]

Hey there! I'm new to this story, but I've read through the older parts and just wanted to tell you how much I loved it! The whole idea is fantastic, you're an awesome writer, and I love how you transfer stuff from the Heroes universe to this one...my absolute favorite detail is the fact that it takes place in Amsterdam (because, like, New Amsterdam=New York...such a history nerd, am I).

Anyway, I love the pacing of everything, and how everything's coming together. Also, you're characterizations are very well done...I just loved this line:

"-He only travelled to the future," interjects Peter, helpfully. "I think he's from Japan."- Ohhh, Peter.

Anyway, I'll stop gushing, but this is awesome! (Well, talk about ending on a non-gushy note).

[indyhat]

Hey! :D Thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm very happy it's not too late to suck people into the story ...

I'm so thrilled you like it and I'm really flattered by your comments. Thank you! Yay!

*does the dance of whee*

Next episode should go up tomorrow.

I'll try to calm down now ;)

[indyhat]

BTW, you get extra brownie-points for the New Amsterdam thing - so far you're the only person to mention it! (though I have a confession to make: that only occurred to me when I was already several chapters in! Huh ;)

[visiblemarket]

Yay! Brownie points!

Though I have a confession to make: that only occurred to me when I was already several chapters in!:

That's okay! It only occured to me a couple of chapters in, as well. Linderman said something along the lines of "Old Money in Old Amsterdam" and it all clicked, and I actually laughed out loud at how perfect that was.

Next episode should go up tomorrow.- In that case, do you mind if I borrow your dance of whee?

[indyhat]

It only occured to me a couple of chapters in, as well. Linderman said something along the lines of "Old Money in Old Amsterdam" and it all clicked, and I actually laughed out loud at how perfect that was.

*g* I wonder if that's when I clicked ... heh.

do you mind if I borrow your dance of whee?

Not at all. Whirling dervishes love company :)