Lyrically awesome

[industrialotaku]

i wrote another song, tell me what u all think of it. I dubbed it, Without You.

Do you think this is fair?
Playing with my heart, without a care
The pain is too much for me
every breath is like a disease
i wanna drift away
run away from you

youre heart is filled with ice
your eyes bring about my demise
i need to find a darkened room
to heal the wounds the disease consumes
In my mind i have to find
when everything was rather fine
........ without you

GET OUT OF MY HEAD,
YOURE TEARING MY MIND TO SHREDS
NEVER NEED
NEVER WANT
NEVER FEEL
NEVER WANNA BE SEEN....WITH YOU

with you
everything felt so warm
in my heart you were adored
now you look through me
consuming all my decency

All the time, i had no clue
another man was there with you
i was just a fly in your hair
a puppet without care
Now that i know of whom u love
there he lies, blood oozing from his tongue
never expected that of me
on my list, the next one is where your name will be
what will life be like
........ without you

GET OUT OF MY HEAD,
YOURE TEARING MY MIND TO SHREDS
NEVER NEED
NEVER WANT
NEVER FEEL
NEVER WANNA BE SEEN....WITH YOU