Where Do We Go From Here? 1/?

[individual_68]

What Happens Now? 1/?

Pairing: Martha/ Rose

Rating: R

Feedback: Oh please won’t you validate me? Haven’t written in a while and this is a new fandom, so I’d love to know what you think. Good or bad I don’t mind, criticism is welcome, it makes us better writers.

Prologue:

He stood at the gates of hell; I was there for him.

He faced his

Comments

[smithy161]

Ooh, interesting. I like the idea of Martha/Rose. Definitely want to know what does happen now.

Just one bit of concrit - 'gates of hell' is a cliché and you use it twice in the space of four lines.

[individual_68]

thanks for the concrit, i thought the same thing, but then opted for a cliche over bulky clunky language.

glad you want to know what happens, will post first proper chapter tomorrow all being well

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