Hidden Moments

Jun 15, 2007 22:48

Hidden Moments

Pairing: addie/callie

Disclaimers: I do not own these two lovely women….if only…

Authors note: this was originally a very different story, but i kinda got side traked and hence this was born.. And also....reviews are love..

Prologue:

A great writer once wrote that we leave a little bit of ourselves behind in any place we leave. I leave ( Read more... )

femslash, callie/addie

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individual_68 June 15 2007, 22:00:12 UTC
glad you like it, i think it was always meant to be from addies pov.

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individual_68 June 18 2007, 21:25:28 UTC
now all i have to do is write the rest

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callieluvr June 21 2007, 21:45:31 UTC
That was so beautifully sad. I can't wait til you update. Good job.

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individual_68 June 21 2007, 22:13:02 UTC
thank you, that means so much to me. i cant wait to write the rest, these girls are filling my head with such wonderful ideas,will hopefully update by the end of the weekend *crosses fingers*

glad you liked it, chapters will be longer

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ubiquitousmixie June 21 2007, 22:17:41 UTC
i love this. beautifully written!

i think the mark of a truely gifted writer is having the ability to write something highly emotional, whether it be happy or sad, and to have your reader actually *feel* the way your characters feel. and you've totally done this.

i can't wait for more. :)

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individual_68 June 21 2007, 23:32:21 UTC
thank you, *smug smirk* lol. morw is on its way. glad you liked it

*does the dance of joy*

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where did u? tarpongal2010 June 22 2007, 17:40:36 UTC
where did u get the i have an lj....icon???tell me please=Dthank u!!

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Re: where did u? individual_68 June 22 2007, 17:43:16 UTC
dunno, sorry

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individual_68 June 25 2007, 17:11:53 UTC
thank you. i love writing first person, it just feels like it flows more, and you can really get into the mind of the character. esp with femslash it gets confusing in third person with the she she she, or names get over used and its stilts the flow of the piece

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