Gift!fic for mikochan_noda: Fall Into Your Sunlight

[indira14]

Fandom: Naruto
Summary: Memories keep the mind company. The body remembers its way back home.
Genre: General/Angst
Word Count: 3,045
Characters: Haruno Sakura, Uchiha Sasuke
Warning: 2nd person, present tense
A/N: When I started writing this last year, I never thought it'd turn into something like this. You do not give a wonderful person depressing

Comments

[indira14]

Aww, thank you~♥ I have no idea where the second person POV came from - I was writing before I knew it and when I looked back, major panic ensued because, "damn it, just how often is 2nd person POV even written" and "what were you thinking, brain? D:"

But I guess braving the possibility of potential "What. What is that even supposed to be. Are you seriously writing this." reactions were worth it<33 I'm glad it worked for this piece, and bought that, uh, ~surreal~ feel to it as well./relieved

Tsunade-Sakura mentor-student relationship is something I've always wanted to explore - because in that respect even Lee and Gai get more spotlight and they're not even main characters. Kishimoto treats his women excellently, doesn't he? :/

I'm so glad that Sasuke's scene worked for you - before sirona_gs got to it, it was horrible. ;__; Sakura's POV was easier to write.

It really tied it all together at the end. - Since there's a conclusive tone to it, so I probably won't turn this into a multi-chapter, as I had originally planned. Or maybe I will - the prospect sounds very tempting right about now. XD

Thank you again for the mems and the lovely comment~♥ :D

P.S. I was wondering if you'd mind being friends? I see you around the sasusaku community a lot and after skimming through your writings, I can only say I like how simple and straightforward it is♥ So how about it? :D

[unicorn_paige]

Definitely worth it! I thought you wrote second POV beautifully. ^_^

Ugh, yeah. Kishimoto's frustrating when it comes to his female characters. I especially hate the way he treats Sakura. He's given her so much potential, but he doesn't use it! Gah, drives me nutters!

Ha-ha, well if you do decide to turn it into a multi-chapter, I'm sure it'll be great! You've set up a really interesting beginning to a Sasuke returns fic. ♥

Daww, shucks! I'd love to be friends. ^///^

[indira14]

Sakura--- ;__; I feel so sorry for her, poor girl. You're so right: Kishimoto has given her so much potential (hell, he's given her the strength of a dinosaur, dammit) and yet, all she seems to be good for is crying and being helpless and generally failing (and not even in the adorable way that Hinata fails. Kishimoto has issues with Sakura, definitely). >8(

I want the Sakura that Grandma Chiyo saw so much potential in, the Sakura that showed Sasori just who was boss and the Sakura that was Naruto's rock when he broke down crying. But, le sigh. :'(

2010 has certainly not been the kindest year to Sakura at all. :/

We'll see about the continuation~ XD I hope things go well for you this year, paige, because my New Year was definitely full of sparkles~

Happy New Year!♥

[unicorn_paige]

Seriously! There was nothing more satisfying than the beginning of Part 2, when Sakura was confident and ready to face a fight.

And what especially bothered me was how the T7 reunion concluded and how Sakura ended up just feeling inferior to Naruto and Sasuke. What happened to the headstrong girl who took care of her boys in the FoD? Even when she knew she was no match for her enemy? I just feel like Sakura would always fight for her boys and not step aside and see what happens...

Yeah, 2010 has seen a lot of ups and downs in the manga (mainly downs). D;

HAPPY NEW YEAR! ^_^