So, I come with porn... I think.

Aug 12, 2010 09:04

So I just handed in my sn_exchange assignment a little before last week, and have been on a break from LJ ever since. It's refreshing, to say the least. Anyway, I discovered that lately I've been failing quite miserably at writing porn.

This way to the sexy meme. )

fanfiction, meme, character: orochimaru, fandom: naruto, nejihina, character: hinata, character: sasuke, character: naruto, practise, drabbles, character: sakura, orosasu, yaoi, narusaku, character: shino, shinohina, sasusaku, sasunaru, one-shots., pairings, smut, het, character: neji

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miko_is_writing August 13 2010, 19:37:14 UTC
i love how you wrote the sasusaku part. brutally painful that it knocks the air out of my chest, darling. sasuke, as always, is perfectly selfish, yet you cannot help but understand. and sakura, well, she will always become his martyr, because sasuke often labels her as someone who can never really understand his loneliness, thus she abuses herself (becoming a willing human cuddle pillow for the bastard) just because she wanted to help him.

*sigh* oh sasusaku, you attract the masochists. really (=__=;;)

this is mikochan_noda, btw. XD too lazy to log out

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indira14 August 13 2010, 22:20:51 UTC
Mikochan~! :DDD Wow, I really didn't expect to get any comments for SasuSaku (why does fandom hate them so much? D: Do they not see the potential for terrible, terrible angst?).

I'm glad you think it's brutally painful - fluff for this pairing gets written much too often, even though there is nothing fluffy about those two at all! except Sakura's cotton-candy hair XD

sasuke often labels her as someone who can never really understand his loneliness, thus she abuses herself (becoming a willing human cuddle pillow for the bastard) just because she wanted to help him. - God, I love how you describe them, because it's so true *___* Write some smut for this please? Just a few sentences :D I haven't seen anything from you in so long and -I never seem to do SasuSaku smut right. :'(

*sighs back* THEY DO. They want us to share their pain, and we will gladly do it forever. XDD

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miko_is_writing August 13 2010, 22:30:46 UTC
unfortunately, i am writing a fluff and smut heavens mercy, what a freaking contradiction for sasusaku right now. i've been writing a lot of sasusaku angst for the past couple of weeks that a friend asked for some smut and fluff.

i think i'll post it soon if i'll be able to finish it some time this week.

lol, we're the willing lambs to the slaughter. XD

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indira14 August 14 2010, 02:04:21 UTC
Hey, fluff and smut aren't the best combination, but since you're writing it, it'll be awesome~! *___*

This week's almost over and bleeding into the next - I'll read it once you post! :D

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miko_is_writing August 14 2010, 13:36:28 UTC
Hi

I basically skipped over all the other pairings to read the S+S story. I wouldn`t label the story as simply smut because it deals with the complexity of the two characters psyches. Sasuke curled up in the dark corner of a room was very sad. It was realistic. In most stories its made to seem like falling in love with Sakura will solve all his problems. Getting a girlfriend won`t be a quick fix for all of Sasuke`s emotional baggage. Of course Sakura will go against her better judgment and sacrifice everything to help him. They are always tragic like that. She is hopelessly smitten. He is too absorbed in his own pain to acknowledge anyone else.

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indira14 August 20 2010, 00:45:38 UTC
Wow, that's the most encouraging thing I've heard about SasuSaku from anyone in a while! :D I agree with most of what you said, and I'm glad you found this realistic, because 'stark and realistic' was what I was going for. Fluff simply does not work with SasuSaku, unless you slightly alter their personalities in some way.

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mikochan_noda August 16 2010, 17:49:03 UTC
posted it dear, though i'm afraid if it can't be qualified as a lemon. :D

so here?
http://miko-is-writing.livejournal.com/6024.html

and your opinions are highly esteemed, feel free to skewer me or send me to my death, dear. as this is the start of my stint as a smut writer nyahaha

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indira14 August 17 2010, 00:18:14 UTC
Going to read it now!

the start of your stint as a smut writer? B-but! I was always under the impression that you were primarily a smut writer. Or at least, that's what your icons led me to believe! XD

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