fic: You and me, we'd look so much better up-side-down

[indiesnopp]

Title:  You and me, we'd look so much better up-side-down
Fandom/Ship: White Christmas (drama), Jo Young Jae-centric, onesided! Young Jae/Eun Sung
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, Mentions of abuse, self harm, depression and minor disturbing imagery
Summary: He finds out quickly that the world can become a lot uglier when narrowed down to exist solely

Comments

[lan_ting]

so so so........
I don't even know where to begin, because i guess I have a lot to say and not so much, but I REALLY wanted to let you a comment here.

I've read it and I don't even know if I breathed haha.
First, i'm really kind of glad because you found a reason behind ... Youngjae's behavior and why he is so afraid of being love and what he said with " i'm afraid people will stop hating me " and yeah... because the drama didn't quite provide us his reason, or didn't develop it enough so yes.

and then. this is really really beautifully written, and breathtaking.
I wish I could half as well haha ♥ this was really really really really beautiful, i'm going to cry now. it was beautiful in the most twisted way but beautiful anyway.
Every metaphors are beautiful and I have so much favorite quotes it can't be favorite quotes anymore because they are really too many.
And I don't even know what to say because it was so short but just so ... perfect.

HERE I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I'M NOT GONNA QUOTE ANYTHING BECAUSE I COULD AS WELL QUOTE THE WHOLE THING AND IT WOULDN'T BE REALLY USEFUL SO HERE I AM DONE WITH MY COMMENT.