[SCC] Coydog - John, Kyle, Derek, Allison - Teen

[indiefic_scc]

TITLE: Coydog
AUTHOR: indiefic
CHARACTERS: John, Allison, Kyle, Derek, OCs
RATING: Teen
WORD COUNT: 3311
WARNINGS: Spoilers for all of T:SCC and the Terminator universe.
DISCLAIMER: Owned by Warner Bros, Friedman, et all. No profit gained, no infringement intended.
TIMELINE: Post Born To Run, set in 2027 or thereabouts
SUMMARY: My fic for scc_reloaded. Written

Comments

[cj2017]

Hitting it out of the ball park as usual, hon!

Loved this. Love the little details; John laughing off his wound, still not in the FutureWorld mindset where a scratch could be the end of you. Kyle knowing otherwise.

The characters were all beautifully drawn and even in a reasonably short piece, Navarro was a great addition as an OC.

"Fuck no, Coydog. I’ll leave your skinny ass to the machines. This old back can’t take that kind of abuse anymore. I threw it out fuckin’ your mama.”

John half chokes, half laughs. “You wouldn’t joke about that if you knew my mom. She’d kick your ass.”

That made me LOL; a good effort in a post-apocalyptic piece which is pretty bleak at heart!

And bless my little Sarah-centric soul, you managed to give her a part even without actually putting her in the story:

John wonders what Sarah would think if she saw him now. Probably that he deserves the limp.

I think that was my favourite line. I was pissed at John after Born to Run, but - slowly and surely - fan fic's bringing me back around to liking him again!

Hope you find the time to write more, cos it's always a pleasure to read :-)

[indiefic]

Thank you so much. I'm really hoping I can write more soon, but I have no idea. I just started another class :( I really want to get back to my post Born to Run series.