Mission T11: A New Beginning

[indemaat]

I think this mission gave me the most difficulty in regards to how pendantic am I going to be about how to do it right. The fic starts with a suicide attempt and I didn't want to be accused of telling people: suicide, this is how you do it.

Comments

[vgdivision]

There were some excellent banter-based moments in this mission. My particular favorite was this little exchange:

"I guess, it's a kind of magic."

Tasmin rolled her eyes. "This is sci-fi, not fantasy."

"They're on the same shelf at my local bookstore."

Very nice. The only major issue I had with this story was sometimes it was difficult to tell who was speaking at any one time, Tasmin or Emma. They sound a bit too much alike to tell which is which just from dialogue. Despite that, it's a darn good mission.

[indemaat]

Thanks for commenting. Nice to hear you liked the mission.

Yeah, I realise the agents sound a lot a like. I think I should start using dialogue tags a bit more.