Kiss Off [2min] [7/11?]

Sep 12, 2011 16:37

Title: Kiss Off [AU multichapter] [7/11?]
author: Bingi (indelible-x)
pairing: Minho/Taemin
rating: PG-15
genre: romance, drama, with a side of fluff (Yeah, let's go with that...)
Disclaimer: OH YEAH, SHINEE? YEAH, WE'RE TIGHT. LEMME JUST CALL 'EM UP ON MY CELLULAR DEVICE. i own nothing
Warnings: AU, high school cliche, cursing, predictable plot, and ( Read more... )

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hi i'm dead fiar22 September 14 2011, 23:36:44 UTC
“Any girlfriend I should be worried about?”
lol taemin and a girlfriend. Also, oblivious parents ftw

Hours later, the sun was rising and the first bell of school was going to ring soon, and Minho still had yet to sleep.
can I just take a minute to say this scene was perfect? I could see sleepy jinki rolling out of bed and practically killing himself just for Minho's call. Also, Minho being so absent-minded that he completely forgets about the Jonghyun situation (which i'm very happy you decided to include.) and Taemin, being Jonghyun's best friend, doesn't know about it at all. ajsfhjadhf WONDER WHAT HAPPENS WHO KNOWS omg.

“Don’t look so worried. Trust me, Minho is around here somewhere. The last thing he’d want to do is skip out on any of his Taemin ‘cuddle time’ or whatever you guys call it.”
I felt like Taemin was about to start crying hysterically when Minho wasn't there. Also, Onew's reference to the cuddle time was the best. When I read this part I was like "wait I think I know what's going to happen. this seems familiar" and then I realized it was part you had me beta earlier on. xD

Once they cleared the hallway, Taemin wasted no time in grabbing Minho by the elbow and shoving him into the nearest bathroom.
Taemin's like "WTF omg ur bleedin, let's make out," xD This is why kiss off is the best.

Taemin’s shirt was riding up and his back was digging into the lock on the bathroom stall door but neither of those things really mattered right now because Minho had his lips working at his neck and his hands were gripping tight enough at his exposed hips to make Taemin whine.
uhh this was a bit in the middle of no where, but i'll take it. xD I was like "WHAT THE FUCK THEY'RE HAVING SEX NOW." and then I remembered I read this too. xD was just as good the second time.

Taemin freezes, not sure what to do next.

Jonghyun says nothing, just looked at Taemin in a way that made him feel guilty even though he wasn’t sure why.
oomg I was doyinyignigningng I DYIYNIGNGNG I CANNNOT JONGTAE BFF FOR LIFE OMG why do you do this to me. dead i'm just dead and you're killing me and how am I supposed to to asdievenejnv e WHYYYYYYYY I CANNOT. OH MY GOD THIS IS CRY WORTHY. If nothing else, this was just like everything about this chapter. There was 2min sex and onew being onew, but god dammit jongtae angst kills me like no other. huhuhuhhhhhhhhh JONGTAE4LYF I cannot even.

In the same motion, they looked away from each other, turned on their heels, and walked away from each other.
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

omg srs tears gurl. kiss off 4 lyf.

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Re: hi i'm dead indelible_x September 14 2011, 23:59:23 UTC
THE JONGHYUN SITUATION IS IMPORTANT OKAY.
you'll prolly hear about it. a lot. be prepared. omg.

taemin is like a helpless kindergartner. how pathetic. minho likes it though. HE'S INTO THAT KIND OF THING. ;DDD

yeah i sent a lot of this chapter do you awhile ago LOL. i changed some of it but. yeah. make out scenes awww w yyyyeyeaahayeyyayyywey yeyhay eyahe yeayhea yeah AND NO THEY'RE NOT HAVING SEX THAT ISN'T HAPPENING RIGHT NOW YOU SHUT UP LOLOLOL

jongtae drama is the only drama okay i gotta work with it but wait i guess there's jongho drama now o man i don't even know what i'm doing

ily georgi

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Re: hi i'm dead fiar22 September 15 2011, 01:44:22 UTC
jongho 4 lyf
jongtae 4 lyf
onho 4 lyf
2min 4 lyf
ontae 4 lyf
jongkey 4 lyf
taekey 4 lyf
MINKEY 4 lyf

omg this only thing this fic is missing is onkey and jongyu. OH MY GOD.

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Re: hi i'm dead indelible_x September 15 2011, 02:27:16 UTC
....omg

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fiar22 January 25 2012, 00:52:43 UTC
"“…It’s three in the morning. People only call other people at three in the morning for two reasons, and neither are very pretty. But just for official record, I don’t take booty calls, Minho, but I’d be more than happy to help bury a body.”"
onew doesn't take booty calls, but he slowly remembers all the nights he called minho when patty wasn't there and he was drunk just so he could get some. just so he could have minho's scent all over him.

"Now that Minho had Onew’s attention, he wasn’t exactly sure where to start, or how to phrase his questions. He ended up standing up from his spot by the window sill, shifter his phone to the other ear, scratching the back of his head in thought. After pacing the length of his room once, twice, he still had no idea where to begin."
He wanted Onew but he couldn't tell him that. He was trying to make Onew jealous with Taemin and if Onew knew he wanted him it would ruin everything. Minho couldn't stand to let Onew have the upper hand any longer.

"After that, Onew hung up, and Minho tossed his phone off to the side. After a brief moment of thought, he decided that as usual, Onew was right, but he still wouldn't mention a thing to Taemin."
he'd keep using him to make onew jealous. he just wanted onew to love him. that was all he wanted.

"He didn’t have long to think on it before the door opened and Onew came in a second later.

“Good morning Taemin!” He greets, smiling widely, and Taemin smiles back, despite the new feeling of disappointment."
Taemin doesn't know, but that doesn't mean Onew can't play with him a little bit. Now that he knows Taemin is a part of him and Minho's game.

"“What was that for?” Taemin laughs, pulling himself upright and straightening his shirt.

Minho smirks. “Revenge for this morning.”"
little does taemin know that it's revenge against onew, not him.

"he nearly tripped over himself to prevent from running right into Jonghyun, who just so happened to be walking home the same time as him.

Taemin knew that there was really no point in trying to avoid him, the two of them being neighbors and all, but up until this point he hadn’t even so much as caught a glimpse of Jonghyun. And suddenly, here they were, face to face, Jonghyun turning around to look at him, slipping his headphones down from his ears to rest around his neck.

Taemin freezes, not sure what to do next.

Jonghyun says nothing, just looked at Taemin in a way that made him feel guilty even though he wasn’t sure why. He thinks that he should be mad at Jonghyun since he was the one that started all of this anyway, but he can’t work up the energy for a glare, just frowns not sure what to make of Jonghyun’s reaction.

And in that moment, they both realized that they had a lot to say to each other-mostly about how much of an awful friend they’d been to each other but also Taemin wanted to tell him about Minho and Jonghyun wanted to tell him about what had really happened. But in reality, Jonghyun had no clue and neither did Taemin, so they ended up saying nothing at all.

In the same motion, they looked away from each other, turned on their heels, and walked away from each other. Taemin walked and didn’t stop walking until he had cleared the neighborhood and walked out past school and ended up by the McDonalds that Minho had taken him to on that day that started it all.

And it was there that he finally let out the breath that he’d been holding, letting his hands unclench, and deciding that he’d have to fix things before it was too late."
and that was the last time taemin saw jjong...

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fiar22 January 25 2012, 00:55:21 UTC
BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY.
OH MY FUCKING GOD CRYING OVER THE ENDING. I JUST READ THIS WHOLE THING DOING THE FAKE LITERARY ANALYSIS THING AND I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE EASY BUT OMG I JUST WANTED TO CRY THE WHOLE TIME. THIS LAST PART. TE PAR TWITH JJONG. i cannTNASNDFINSTNTT
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME

KELSEY YOU ARE KILLING ME.
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so much intense jjong moments they just need to be together and omg i am going to die like wtf write kiss off right now i am dead srsly about to die just writ eis sdofmsdogmogmogmg
why do you do this to me.

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indelible_x January 25 2012, 01:08:59 UTC
geprgi oho my fuckak omg i'm sobbing this analysis i've never cried so hard HAHAHAHAHHAHA PATTY AND ONEW FOREVER you make me ship this and i can't even what are you ever omg why

i hate you and love you for doing this. why do you do this. i'm just going to reread your analysis and cry myself to sleep and then cry while sleeping and then wake up crying and then just cry becayse omg whyay hwhy d oy ou do this
i can't
with
you
ijustcan;t

also i may or may not become your illegal roommate in order to type up the update. it'll be great, i'm the illegal immigrant you never even knew you wanted.

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fiar22 January 25 2012, 01:47:28 UTC
i want it come here bby i will feed you and take care of you omg i will be your noona neomu yeppo

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