rpf: passing grammatical mistakes (normani kordei/lauren jauregui/camila cabello)

[perfectlystill]

Title: Passing Grammatical Mistakes
Pairing/Characters: Normani/Lauren/Camila
Summary: Lauren's music was spilling out past the door and into the hallway, like usual, and the door was unlocked, like usual, but when Normani walked in Lauren had Camila pressed into her mattress, hand tangled in her hair. Not at all like usual. College AU.
Rating: PG-

Comments

[sixtywattgloom]

OH MY GOD EMMA (HI I STARTED WRITING THIS REVIEW LIKE AN HOUR AGO BUT THEN FAMILY SO)

ANYWAY I HAVE NEVER WANTED TO CURL UP AND LIVE INSIDE A FIC SO VERY VERY MUCH AS THIS ONE IN A LONG TIME LIKE BY THAT LAST SCENE I COULD JUST FEEL IT ALL THE WAY DOWN TO MY TOES LIKE ETERNAL HEARTEYES

what i'm saying is that i've been waiting for ot3 fic for months and months and the fact that you wrote it and turned it into everything i love makes me the actual happiest person you just keep making my prompts seem so much better than anything i can imagine ty for that!!!! i was left wanting ten thousand more words about this lovely 'verse (a totally reasonable request right) and can i just tell you all of the characterization was so outstanding (for ALL THE GIRLS ally as ra made me scream) and made me smile about a thousand times and i'm so grateful to you for this it's everYTHING 2 ME <3333

[perfectlystill]

KAYLA!!!

i'm so, so glad that you loved this a lot because i know how much you're all about this ot3 (the best ot3!) and i wouldn't want to ruin everything. and i'm glad you thought the characterization worked! i was bit worried because i'd a) never written something from normani's perspective and b) AUs allow for some change but also you still want them to be them -- or, in this case and with all rpf, the them you've filled in in your head -- so that means a lot. Thank you so, so much for this comment <3333333333333

[latexana]

Dude, do you dig 5h? Cause that would be aces.

[latexana]

No man, cause I still remember all the glee/pll/tvd fics ive read fromfrom you, so nice to see you still ha e flawless taste.

[anonymous]

This was fantastic. I love how subtle you are at one moment then so detailed and clear the next. Really good!

[perfectlystill]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it.

[perfectlystill]

TY!

[fanmail]

I was directed here by Kayla (I don't know her livejournal name, but she's 5horbust on tumblr!), and I just had to leave a comment telling you how amazing I thought this was. I've only read three Fifth Harmony fics (this being the third one) and it was definitely a wonderful introduction into the world into the world of 5h fanfiction.

I absolutely love love love how you write Normani. Write Normani forever please.

I just really enjoyed this so much, it was wonderful.