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Rachel Berry - Anything You Can Do (oneshot)

Dec 22, 2009 17:20

Title: Anything You Can Do
Character/Pairings: Rachel-centric
Summary: Clearly he thought she was over quitting Glee. But if he still can’t appreciate what she brings to the club, even after taking the lead at sectionals and inspiring everyone, then she thinks it’s only her prerogative to leave. In which Rachel quits Glee club and joins Debate ( Read more... )

type:fic, fandom: glee, character: rachel berry

Comments 3

hide_r December 23 2009, 02:05:22 UTC

This is so cute! And so Rachel! I love that she ended up in debate team, only to quit that too lol. And this is probably just the Puck/Rachel shipper in me reading into things but I love their little snippets as well!

comeundone December 23 2009, 04:38:55 UTC

THIS WAS PERFECT. Better than I could have imagined. I knew my prompt was specfic (sorry!) but this came out exactly as I wanted it, if not better.

She fuming, absolutely livid. Her dads will sue the school and Mr. Tanaka for violating the first amendment; that’ll show them. It is completely unfair to punish her for being the best person on debate team; it’s not Rachel’s fault if she is exceedingly talented in multiple areas.

I loved these two lines. Violating the first ammendment, amazing.

& How she got asked to leave her girl scout troop, being disqualified from a practice debate, Puck whispering in her ear... I love all the little things you put in this story, I feel like thats what makes it so great. ANYWAY, if I haven't made it obvious enough, I love this and thank you thank you thank you for writing it!

katakokk December 23 2009, 22:04:23 UTC

Ooooh, I liked this! Especially because, if I remember correctly, Rachel is in the picture for debate team in the yearbook photo montage in Mattress, right?

Also, just a quick note, in certain types of debate (namely Public Forum or Parliamentary, both of which are partner debates), you can interrupt another person's speech, even when it is their turn to make a point (not just during crossfire), but this is generally because of personal insult or the other speaker breaking the rules (the first is known as Point of Personal Preference, the second Point of Order - in Parliamentary Debate ( ... )