nick/miley - it feels like stealing hearts (3/3)

[perfectlystill]

Title: It Feels Like Stealing Hearts
Character/Pairings: Nick/Miley
Summary: Nick still likes Miley. In fact, he is fairly certain he never stopped liking her-- in a strictly platonic way. ( I'm a Modern Girl, But I Fold in Half So Easily from Nick's POV)
Rating: PG (Some language)
Word Count: 5,700
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing. The title is

Comments

[empressearwig]

You're trying to kill me with feelings, right? Just this:

This moment feels natural, like it was going to happen one way or another. It doesn’t seem like it’s about her breaking up with her boyfriend- for him? He’s not going to think things like that. It’s about something else entirely. The fact that she trusts him again, how he’s anchoring her down, making her smile, making her feel something that she isn’t scared to feel anymore.

And this:

She’s everywhere, all that he can sense and all that he can feel.

He really missed feeling like this.

And he isn’t sure what’s going to happen next or where things are going between them, or even how to define their relationship. But he’s positive that Miley will always be there. The journey has been more than worth it, because things will be okay between them. They’ll always be able to go back to each other and feel safe, feel how he feels right now.

He’s only ever felt it with her. That’s not scary like it used to be--it’s comforting. And god, have I said how much I love all the sort of

[perfectlystill]

I'm glad you enjoyed this, because I'm sure that 95% of the reason I finished it was because of you.

[nickj94]

I love it so much! The part that I love most, is that I can actually picture all of this stuff happening. Nick and Joe's relationship is hilarious and I love all of the little Joe and Demi things you added. It's perfect! :D

[anonymous]

ok seriously i just HAD to comment : your NM stories are incredible. this one was just.... words can't even describe. and man oh man you have a way with words. not only do u know NM so well and describe potential situations that even now (when all hope for them seems to be lost) you give me faith for their future, but my god, your writing!! you just have some mad talent and skills, girl. just thought i should let you know. also, please never stop writing. keep the NM love going and continue to pursue this hobby of yours because by god, you have so much talent within you. it's all over your writing, i'm serious. you are so much more than simply gifted - so please pursue this passion of yours and continue to write. even if it is for the sake of one devoted NM fan out there who's obsessed with your stories.

[anonymous]

oh and also, i wanted to add that i always love your subtle references to what we know about their real relationship, it just makes your stories all the more realistic and plausible. they're small, but they're countless, and that shows your attention to detail. and of course, i love the little references to the other characters : Kevin/Danielle, and Joe/Demi, of course. The Joe/Demi moments are always adorable and so real - they clearly show you know the real-life dynamic and natural chemistry between those two well.