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demi/selena - 5 times Demi Lovato ran away from home and 1 time she didn't (oneshot)

Jul 28, 2009 12:41

Title: 5 Times Demi Lovato Ran Away from Home and 1 Time She Didn't
Character/Pairing: Demi, Demi/Selena (femslash)
Summary: So she took one shaky step and found that the next one was easier.
Rating: PG-13, I guess
Word Count: ~4,500
Disclaimer: I own nothing, this is entirely fictitious.

( She was enjoying the cooling of the summer heat as the day faded into evening, the sun just beginning its descent down the sky. )

type: fic, ship: demi/selena, fandom: disney

Comments 9

lastchance_197 July 28 2009, 18:49:53 UTC

The part about Demi hating pink REALLY made me giggle lol.

The middle school scene? heart breaking, really.

First kiss was adorable, tasting like pickles? genius.

She knows she finally had the courage to run home.

Wow what a beautiful line... really really wonderful.

tvwizard July 28 2009, 19:40:51 UTC

I really loved it. Amazing job, truly. I can't wait to read more from you in the future.

kittyspotneko July 28 2009, 19:59:04 UTC

oh oh oh that was cute! i loved it! really i dd. picturin them as kids always makes me smile cuz its just like 'awwww!!' loved it

xxalynaj July 29 2009, 04:28:56 UTC

Oh my gosh...This was SO sweet.
I was awwing at the first kiss part, and the very end of course.
Every scene felt so real.
This really blew me away.
Fantastic job.

livrockluv32 July 29 2009, 06:17:22 UTC

Beautiful. The last line was amazingly perfect. I loved the progression from their younger days to the future. Very well rounded and well done. :]