Book 3, Chapter 11: Spiraling (2/2)

Aug 11, 2009 21:28

Title: Spiraling (2/2)
Authors: kiltsandlollies and escribo
Characters: Billy, Dominic
Word count: 4300
Summary: Time passes; other things don't.
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction; the recognizable people in the story belong to themselves and have never performed the actions portrayed here. I do not know the actors nor am I associated with them in any way. If ( Read more... )

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hyacinth_sky747 August 12 2009, 02:16:20 UTC
I am so very angry with you. You're not suppose to write "and then he woke up" stories. It's not done. You fucking had me by the balls and I was all set to be happy.

Which, of course, means the story has me gripped and all that. But still. Grrr.

Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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eff_reality August 12 2009, 02:20:40 UTC
God. Damn. You. Both.

...On second thought, I'm really glad that this isn't the reality. There's something so much more rich about the fact that this is not what happens but what Billy dreams. I feel like this is the most candid access we've gotten to Billy in a while on this journey. It's heartbreaking.

Billy reaches up, pressing fingers to Dominic’s lips to quiet him, fingers Dominic immediately holds and kisses with the reverence Billy has missed as much as anything else-that feeling of being so completely necessary to someone else, an accesory to the happy, perfect crime of devotion and courage other people more easily call love.
And um, yeah, I totally cried.

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msilverstar August 17 2009, 01:21:11 UTC
noooooo, I want it to be real, not hopes dashed, heart broken...

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piratesorka August 25 2009, 05:36:37 UTC
I missed this while I was on my "vacation" in hell and I was so excited when I began to read this. I couldn't help but think as I read it:
"Oh its the one! The one that brings them back together!'

and then there is the fucked up sound of a stupid telephone. ARRRRRGGGGGGGHHHH.

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