Book 2, Chapter 13: Blue in the Broad Light of Day (2/2)

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Title: Blue in the Broad Light of Day (2)
Authors: kiltsandlollies
Characters: Billy/Dominic
Word count: 3061
Summary: Continues from here.
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[eff_reality]

“Hello,” Billy says simply, and Dominic laughs, pulling Billy down for another kiss.
Hello indeed.

You have no idea how much I needed this. Thank you.

Pure, unadulterated bliss. As always.

♥

[msilverstar]

improvised, scattered rendition of what Dominic calls a scene and Billy identifies more abstractedly but no less passionately as play.

How I love flustered Billy: not that I want him to suffer (much), but that imperfect characters are so much more interesting than perfect ones. I'm seeing a lot more of what makes Billy tick in this version than the first draft, and I like it.

ETA: fixed end italic (yes I am slightly compulsive about html)

[cordeilla33]

Wow! This story is just...just Brilliant! It makes me see Billy in a whole different light...but the passion is always perfect between him and Dom. I'm glad the the want and need for Dom from Billy is pushing them closer still and now Billy is feeling the same that Dom felt at the start.

[hyacinth_sky747]

I'm wondering how long it will take for Dom to become frustrated with Billy saying he shouldn't have done things. On the one hand, it must be kind of thrilling to know someone is willing to break rules for you and on the other it's kind of degrading to know you're always someone's mistake.

I can't wait to see what you do with it.

[feelforfaith]

Billy closes his eyes and shakes his head, not wanting to explain anything, much less the need he'd felt for contact he wasn't meant to have until the weekend, until it was safe to do so.

This, Billy needing something from Dominic so badly, he's ready to take this kind of risks, is wonderful. And hot. :)