Prompt Post No. 12

Dec 22, 2010 00:00

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[fill] blood and bone (6/?) - WARNING: MENTIONS OF VIOLENCE/GORE anonymous January 1 2011, 16:32:44 UTC
His hand carded through her hair, soothing. Ariadne smiled and leaned into the touch. It was not often, and really more like never, that she was touched. People were too afraid of her reputation, her clawed hands, her unnaturally young appearance. Not unjustified fear. Her hands clenched into fists as she recalled the young prisoner she had been to see earlier, the vivid memory of his blood moving down her fingers, his innards glistening in the scant light below her, and his cries dwindling to nothing. He had been so interesting. She smiled softly. Perhaps they had good reason to fear her.

She reached up and behind her, ran her hand along Dom’s cheek. It was rough, unshaved recently. She hooked her fingers around the curve of his ear and turned, wiping the smile from her face. He looked down at her, his gaze dull.

“Dom, dear, this’ll work. Soon, you’ll have her back.”

His hands patted her hair down. “Yes, I’ll have Mal back.”

He looked a bit happier at the reminder, and the lines graven into his face grew shallower. He made to turn away from Ariadne, but she held on, slipping her hand down to the back of his neck and pulling him close, so that her head rested on his chest. She listened to his deep breaths and fought the urge to slip her hand through his skin and between his ribs, feel the vivid beat of life within. Instead, she simply listened. He couldn’t go on like this, pining for his dead wife. She wouldn’t let him. Dom must be assuaged. He must learn to accept what was and let her go. She spoke without looking up.

“You will see Mal soon. You will see her.”

Ariadne let a soft trail of magic slip from her claws and move through Dom. Ordinarily he would have noticed the invasion, but he was too distraught and distracted to pay her magic, to pay her, any attention. She let the magic move through him and persuade him that she was right - that no matter what happened, no matter how Mal returned to them, Dom would recognize her and be satisfied. And then, Ariadne hoped, he would be able to let her go. After all, she had never promised Dom that he would get to keep Mal. Her smile grew once more, and she hid it behind the lapel of his jacket.

Nevertheless, if this Arthur failed entirely, if he could not manage to Raise Mal at all despite his stellar reputation, there was nothing Ariadne could do. She couldn’t reverse death, only cause it. Perhaps she would pay Arthur a visit, and ensure that he completed the task. Dom’s arms wrapped tight around her, and his heartbeat sped.

Yes, she’d go visit Arthur. Soon.

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Re: [fill] blood and bone (6/?) - WARNING: MENTIONS OF VIOLENCE/GORE anonymous January 4 2011, 06:36:46 UTC
Wow, I love the dark atmosphere and details of the world in this story!
The detail of Ariadne's claws is so fascinating and really adds to the scary aspect of the character. Am completely intrigued about Eames and who Fischer wants raised. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
You are SOOO AMAZING anon!!<3

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OP anonymous January 6 2011, 00:57:19 UTC
I can't help but feel that Ariadne's plan is going to backfire on her... *shiver*

This is good stuff, Anon! The atmosphere you create is so chilling!

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Re: [fill] blood and bone (6/?) - WARNING: MENTIONS OF VIOLENCE/GORE anonymous January 8 2011, 04:45:46 UTC
not the OP, but am really liking where this is going, Anon. The atmosphere is so dark and creepy; I like how you've written the characters, especially Ariadne's. She's very spine-chilling, so is Eames'. Keep it up!!

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Re: [fill] blood and bone (6/?) - WARNING: MENTIONS OF VIOLENCE/GORE anonymous January 9 2011, 19:55:03 UTC
@inceptionwips is tracking this on twitter, if that's okay with you.

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Re: [fill] blood and bone (6/?) - WARNING: MENTIONS OF VIOLENCE/GORE anonymous January 9 2011, 23:35:06 UTC
That's fabulously fine, I'm thrilled.

xo
Anon

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