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Winter War: Soi Fong: En Garde

Oct 02, 2009 00:51

Title: Soi Fong: En Garde
Arc: Winter War - an AU co-write with liralen and sophiap
Characters: Soi Fong, others
Rating/Warning: PG-13 for language, references to character death
Summary: Before tactics, one must have strategy.
Notes: This is a rather dark AU co-plotted with liralen and sophiap. The war against Aizen's forces went very badly. Nothing is sacred and no one is ( Read more... )

winter war, bleach

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naughty_gurrl October 2 2009, 01:05:19 UTC

This plan seemed so possible. Now they are up a creek without a life raft. I really can't wait to see how they get out of this mess.

incandescens October 2 2009, 08:32:15 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it. :)

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incandescens October 2 2009, 08:34:25 UTC

I'm very pleased that the tactics discussion worked and wasn't boring. Thank you!

As to what happens next . . . I will express your concerns to my colleagues. :)

(aw kitty kitty kitty so cute)

liralen October 10 2009, 05:51:22 UTC

Awwww... kitty!!

ravens_rising October 2 2009, 02:02:22 UTC

I must say that I greatly enjoyed this chapter. I adore plot and this whole type of thing, everyone discussing different sides of a plan/issue, and you're an excellent writer so you pulled it all off in character and with no one being portrayed as an idiot.

Also, on a purely superficial level, I was like YAAAY UKITAKE'S IN THIS CHAPTER! *shameless fangirl* Heh.

But ajskdfl;a what happened in the end?? *SHAKES YOU THREE*

PS: Almost forgot, SORA! ♥ ♥

incandescens October 2 2009, 08:33:02 UTC

I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the chapter and that everyone seemed plausibly intelligent.

I hope that a future chapter will answer your questions. :)

vionaxinyi October 2 2009, 10:35:58 UTC

That was awesome! The tactics discussion made so much sense and said so much about the situation. :)

Poor Rikichi. I do suppose he is in some sort of trouble now? :P

incandescens October 2 2009, 11:26:47 UTC

Thank you!

(As for Rikichi . . . well, yes, trouble would be one way of putting it.)

theablackthorn October 2 2009, 12:29:20 UTC

So well arranged. The plans were perfect - I can't believe Rikichi would...betray them. I hope that's not what he's doing.

incandescens October 2 2009, 12:48:55 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it. ;)

theablackthorn October 2 2009, 13:27:00 UTC

Very much though it is very sad at times :)

incandescens October 2 2009, 13:56:40 UTC

I'm afraid so, yes. And don't count on everyone surviving, either. Or even winning.

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