CONCRIT
Alternate takes are tricky. Have I lost touch with everything that makes Roxas essentially who he is? Is there something I could do better to make threading with this character more entertaining? Feel free to address your slightest to great concerns here. IP logging's off, anon's on, and comments are not screened. Your thoughts would be lovely.
If you'd rather talk to me in another way, I'm also available on AIM at k north some and both on g-talk and through email at obliviomancy[at]gmail[dot]com. With thanks in advance!
If you'd rather talk to me in another way, I'm also available on AIM at k north some and both on g-talk and through email at obliviomancy[at]gmail[dot]com. With thanks in advance!