Pride

[inarrasnape]

Graphic by tainted_sanity

Comments

[dubbage42]

Very nice!!!!!
ERr - or very dark... but that is a *good* thing.

Anyway - I'm impressed. :)

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[simi]

Thank you! I'm always worry when I post random acts of darkness...

[curi_o]

Jesu! This is awesome. I mean, this is a whole epic story in a concise one-shot.

I'm going to keep it and love it and call it George.

This line is my favorite, not for any poetry, but because of what it says about Malcolm:

“There’s some as shouldn’t breathe the precious air in this verse. We come across another employer like that, we kill him outright and then take his money.”

[simi]

*grins* Thank you! And I'm so glad that Mal shone through, even in his very small role in this!
:-)

[mystic_notions]

This is all kinds of awesome rolled into one. Very nicely done!

[simi]

Thank you!

[cafemercury]

MJ, I don't even follow this fandom and that is just...awesome. So much raw emotion here.

*bows to your awesomeness*

[simi]

*hearts you*

Thank you.

[crazywriterchic]

Dark and perfect. Loved the use of Pride and all the senses. And not in their bunks! Gold star for you!

Maybe God should be angry that I'm rewarding vice.

[simi]

Maybe God should be angry that I'm rewarding vice.

tee hee :D