._ ._.. ._ _ ._ _._ _ ... ._.. _ _ _ ..._ . (Always Love) Ch.11

Apr 19, 2009 10:37

Title: ._ ._.. ._ _ ._ _._ _ ... ._.. _ _ _ ..._ . (Always Love ( Read more... )

heather lisinski, story, edward beck, jericho

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shirleyann66 April 25 2009, 19:14:35 UTC
That happy squealing noise you've been hearing all week has been me. I feel like it's my birthday and Christmas all rolled into one!! First a new chapter from you, then rubberbisquit came out to play. Now all we need is a new chapter from nativefloridian and my week will be complete. :) A snippet from janiekins would be like extra icing on the cupcake!!

Now, on to the story...

Ooooh - saying somebody else's name...ooooohhhhh, that had to hurt....poor Carlos. Poor Heather.

“He told you he was committed to his marriage?”

Ooooookaaaayyyy...what does Carlos know that he's not telling??? There's certainly a backstory between Beck and Carlos that isn't really...comfortable I'm guessing...hmmmmm....

It was if he didn’t know how or want to understand me, he just compromised. And that unnerved me, made me feel guilty that I had browbeaten him into agreeing to my side.

Not a good sign for a long-term relationship, I think.

Edward, when we argued, for all that he drove me crazy, would see things from my point of view, even if he ( ... )

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inanna7 May 2 2009, 22:52:37 UTC
Ok, so to reply to this quickly, because for some reason live journal likes timing out on me after so many minutes for who knows what reason...

“He told you he was committed to his marriage?”

Ooooookaaaayyyy...what does Carlos know that he's not telling??? There's certainly a backstory between Beck and Carlos that isn't really...comfortable I'm guessing...hmmmmm.... I was debating some sort of side story vignette or drabble between Beck and Carlos where Carlos sees Beck as a rival suitor for Heather. Whether I write it is still up in the air ( ... )

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shirleyann66 May 20 2009, 04:23:40 UTC
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. I've been in an absolutely horrendous mood the last few weeks, so while I've been flitting here and there on LJ, I've been too cranky to do much of anything. :(

But, I'm feeling better at the moment, though. :D

I was debating some sort of side story vignette or drabble between Beck and Carlos where Carlos sees Beck as a rival suitor for Heather. Whether I write it is still up in the air.

Well, that would be interesting... :) Given Beck's comments about Carlos, and then this comment, I was wondering what their backstory was all about.

Beck, I think, can be very uncompromising when he wants to be, a wall of sorts, but I figured that if I showed him being that all the time, well, he'd just look like a stubborn prig, and so, the little softening scene afterward to say, I know I'm being a prig about this, but I glad you're still here and didn't leave. Hmm, does that make sense? Yep, perfect sense. And I think, spot on in relation to his character, especially the little softening ( ... )

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inanna7 May 2 2009, 22:54:48 UTC
Oh, I forgot to mention... The roses are in the rose garden at Reid Park (that bulleye's looking thing from google maps). When they are in full force bloom you can smell the roses from about 100 yards or more away, depending on how strong the breeze is...

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shirleyann66 May 20 2009, 04:27:34 UTC
When they are in full force bloom you can smell the roses from about 100 yards or more away, depending on how strong the breeze is...

That's awesome - I love the smell of roses...if I had any talent for growing things, I'd grow roses. In a real greenhouse and everything. But, alas, plants and I have very short-lived relationships (on their part, that is). ;)

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