Comments | in_xanadu: So, there was this boy... {Chapter 2: The Story Remains the Same...}

in_xanadu

So, there was this boy... {Chapter 2: The Story Remains the Same...}

Jun 19, 2011 22:37

Chapter 2: The story remains the same ( Read more... )

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chameleon_18 June 23 2011, 00:53:58 UTC

I like the way you're spinning it away from hanfic. It's definitely like reading a whole new story. And just so's ya know... This really and truly deserves to be published in a book format some day. I cannot wait for more.

p.s. In case you're anything like me and hate if you've missed typos, I noticed a couple:
1) "my Mothers life that"....Should that be "Mother's"?
2) "Seamus was born when he mother was only 14 years old".... Should that be "when his mother was only 14"?

in_xanadu June 23 2011, 03:52:41 UTC

I'm working on pulling it away from fanfic... I am working towards getting it published.

And really, if you find a typo, PLEASE let me know!

carpe_spero June 23 2011, 04:40:58 UTC

Pssst it should maybe be Paddy instead of Patty.