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LOST fic "Scattered Like Light" (Charlie, Dan PG)

Apr 08, 2008 07:54

Scattered Like Light
PG
Charlie, Dan (though not like that, unfortunately!)
Written for the "new friend" challenge at charliepacefic.
Much thanks for the wonderful beta skillz of zelda_zee, who is probably very tired of me by now! :D

( The first time he sees Charlie Pace, Dan has to tell him to move away from his equipment. )

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kat_scratches April 8 2008, 13:56:52 UTC

I only recently started writing again after a looooong, mostly stress-related hiatus, so frankly I'm hoping to see more from me soon too. I'm glad you enjoyed this, though, and thanks for the comments! :)

Also, your icon is really... mesmerizing...

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kat_scratches April 8 2008, 13:58:46 UTC

LOL I knew you meant fic, b/c I can't draw so much as a recognisable stick person.

kat_scratches April 8 2008, 13:57:45 UTC

Creepy? Really? *thinks* Maybe, yeah. I'm glad you liked it though! :)

elliotsmelliot April 8 2008, 13:45:26 UTC

I really enjoyed this. You did amazing job with Daniel's disorientation and I find it very believable that Charlie would latch onto him like that. Great work!

kat_scratches April 8 2008, 13:55:14 UTC

Thanks! I think consuming pot after pot of dark roast coffee kind of added to believable disorientation, LOL, b/c I know I certainly was. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

alfiri April 8 2008, 15:16:56 UTC

I love the fic!
What a brilliant idea :D

kat_scratches April 8 2008, 15:19:23 UTC

Hee, thanks! Glad you liked it! I love your icon, incidentally.

lady_boromir April 8 2008, 15:18:27 UTC

Oooh, I really like this concept! And you got both Charlie and Dan's personality down perfectly! :D

kat_scratches April 8 2008, 15:21:20 UTC

Thank you! I've been quite enjoying the music vids you've been posting, incidentally, though I'm terrible about commenting. "Unwell" has been my favourite so far.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this fic! :)

lady_boromir April 8 2008, 15:22:30 UTC

Awww, thank you! :)

I loved the fic, and I can't wait to read more from you! :D

kat_scratches April 8 2008, 15:53:59 UTC

So, what you're saying is, I ought to get my ass in gear & finish up "Rat Number Eight", yeah? *cheeky grin*

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