170. {1shot} [suits] (harvey/donna) the silent night will shatter

[onlywordsnow]

the silent night will shatter (one too many mornings, bob dylan); harvey/donna ; pg-13 (maybe r); 4,005 words;

his hand shakes, makes a fist like a habit

a/n: i don't even know what this is it just kind of happened

Comments

[lapiccolina]

This is amazing.

Wow.

The tension, the amount of time passage. Donna in a comma would reduce Harvey into something like this. Wow. Just wow.

[onlywordsnow]

Thank you!

[pengyn]

This was absolutely amazing!
I loved the way that you captured Harvey and his emotions whilst still keeping him in character.
I really enjoyed this!

[onlywordsnow]

I appreciate that, thank you.

[just_liv]

This is so dark and full of angst...

I love it!!

[onlywordsnow]

Thanks!

[phrenitis]

All the feels!! The angst was palpable and dark, and the imagery loaded... just, wow. Very nicely done!

[onlywordsnow]

Thank you! :)

[abvj]

I really enjoyed this! You have such a lyrical way of writing that I really admire. Hope to see more from you soon!

[onlywordsnow]

Just keep writing, writing, writing. ha. Thank you though! I sometimes feel disappointment in what I write.