Fic: "Ports in a Storm"

Jan 21, 2012 10:36



Title: "Ports in a Storm"
Characters: John Watson, DI Lestrade
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Word Count: c. 1,000
Warnings: Mentions of suicide; language
Spoilers: through "Reichenbach"

Summary: Lestrade wonders why Sherlock didn't trust them.

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thesmallhobbit January 21 2012, 16:47:04 UTC
That is so unutterably sad. Are you trying to make me cry? You have captured the pain and the draining effect this has had so very well. And then the final scene, when at least John has fallen asleep, words fail me.

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impishtubist January 21 2012, 20:25:45 UTC
I'm sorry! I'm not actively trying to make you cry, but I'm pleased that this moved you so much. Thank you. I'm so glad that the final scene was effective. Thank you for the feedback!

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mazaher January 21 2012, 17:42:28 UTC
Wanted to find the right words to comment, but it seems I've run out of them. This is beautiful.

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impishtubist January 21 2012, 20:25:51 UTC
Thank you!

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r34dinglight January 21 2012, 18:12:29 UTC
talk about an angst one can wrap oneself in. am not sure how you manage it but, again, as always; voice, detail, and emotion are used at their best. kudos for such stellar work.

now off to find that tissue.

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impishtubist January 21 2012, 20:26:03 UTC
Thank you, thank you!

*hands over tissues*

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sabrinaphynn January 21 2012, 18:49:15 UTC
impishtubist January 21 2012, 20:26:37 UTC
I'm sorry to have broken your heart! But thank you. I like to think that each of these characters occupies a portion of Sherlock's heart, but I can see also where he would subdivide them into the categories you mention.

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morganstuart January 21 2012, 19:04:38 UTC
Just beautiful. I wholly believe the Look after John. Well done, you.

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impishtubist January 21 2012, 20:27:00 UTC
Thank you so very much, my friend. That means a lot to hear from you. I'm so pleased you liked the final text from Sherlock.

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