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Drabble: Paid

Aug 22, 2008 14:14

Author: immortal_jedi
Rating: PG
Summary: Drabble 31 of the series The Unraveling Thread. “You have paid your one hundred years of service ( Read more... )

drabble, fic: potc

Comments 6

mamazano August 22 2008, 22:20:48 UTC

Ouch! I keep hoping for a cheerful ending...

No, seriously, this has been an incredible series. Very eye opening.

immortal_jedi August 22 2008, 22:23:24 UTC

Well, I know how this series is going to end, now, and I just know I'm going to get yelled at.

I'm glad you've enjoyed this.

idle_curiosity August 22 2008, 23:43:33 UTC

Man ...

I've been keeping up with this and the twists and turns that you've put into it are mind boggling.

It's like reading a Twilight Zone episode online. And your writing is fabulous, because the creep factor is coming thru loud and clear. Nothing is lost in translation, the way it sometimes can be. With just 100 words, you've managed to convey the build up of suspense from a rather unremarkable (if you can call being shipwrecked unremarkable, lol) beginning.

I can't imagine what you have in store for an ending, but I don't think it's going to be Disneyesque or fairy-tale happy somehow.

Excellent work.

immortal_jedi August 23 2008, 05:26:55 UTC

thank you!

There's something very Twilight Zonesque about the Dutchman and servitude on her. I'm glad I was able to portray that.

No, I don't think it'll be a Disney style ending.

idle_curiosity August 23 2008, 06:03:45 UTC

I'm so intrigued, lol. I can't wait to see how you're going to wrap this up.

kseenaa August 25 2008, 12:25:53 UTC

Oh, Bootstrap! *cuddles him... and Will* Seriously. Those two and middle name angst. But yay! Freedom! At least... :-P I just hope Bill will be alive when Will is freed... :-P