My Family, By Ben Braeden

Oct 13, 2012 11:40

Title: My Family, By Ben Braeden

Author: immortal_jedi

Wordcount: 537

Rating: PG

Characters: Ben, Lisa, Dean, Sam, Adam, Castiel, Bobby

Warnings: 11 year old POV

Summary: The version that absolutely will not be turned in to the teacher, Ben Braeden, so help me God! Another “Heaven, Hell and A Mechanic” fic.

Spoilers: Spoilers for the first five seasons, ( Read more... )

fic: supernatural, fic, heaven hell and a mechanic

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auntmo9 October 13 2012, 17:32:55 UTC
This is wonderful! And what happens when it falls out of Ben's notebook/backpack and the teacher finds it anyway?

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immortal_jedi October 13 2012, 21:52:06 UTC
Thank you!

*laughs* I honestly have no idea what would happen if a teacher found this version. I can imagine some interesting issues... but I have no idea how to write it.

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auntmo9 October 13 2012, 22:13:22 UTC
That would be an very interesting and challenging outsider POV to try and tackle....I would not want to be Lisa when she had to go to that parent/teacher conference! LOL!

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jennytork October 13 2012, 19:01:25 UTC
HA! And I agree with the previous comment!!

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immortal_jedi October 13 2012, 21:52:36 UTC
Thank you! And you know, I kinda wonder what a teacher would think too...

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ramblin_rosie October 13 2012, 23:13:36 UTC
YAY, you posted it! And it's as funny as I'd expected! :D Love Ben's definitions of Dean's terminology, especially.

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immortal_jedi October 14 2012, 22:22:29 UTC
Thank you! And I got the impression that Ben loved Dean, and of course he'd learn how Dean talked, and explain it to anyone he could.

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pinkyapples October 16 2012, 00:36:05 UTC
Just discovered this series. What a riot, sitting her cackling to myself in front of the computer like a happy lunatic. Keep writing this verse - please.

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immortal_jedi October 16 2012, 00:58:55 UTC
Thank you! I love it when I hear things like this! And don't worry, I have another story in this universe about to go to beta.

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angeltrap November 25 2012, 21:38:41 UTC
Awwh, I just discovered and read the whole series and loved it to tiny little bits, but this? This just about sums it all up. ♥ That last line in particular. Funny, sweet and exactly the kind of daydream-headcanon I occasionally need to get me out of my canon gloom and doom funk!

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immortal_jedi November 26 2012, 01:24:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think that this is a good series. And you caught me- I write this series when I'm feeling down about what's happening in canon.

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