Fanart: Pose

[immorta_beloved]

Title: Pose
Fandom: Viewfinder
Character: Yoh
Rating: NC-17 (for nudity)
Warnings: not worksafe (just to be sure), partial (well... almost total) nudity

Comments

[krambi003]

Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
*grabs tons of tissues to help with the nosebleed and wipes drool from her chin, desk, keyboard....*
Me wanna be the tie *brain has melted*

Okay, I try to focus long enough to write something coherent *yes, we can! mode-ON*
You know, I have always thought that under the rather deceiving suit, Yoh's body was somehow closer to Asami's body appearance than we could first thought. I got the confirmation when reading Naked Truth Zero and also when seeing Yoh wearing the more casual clothes in FnR: no doubt about what was under this polo shirt *drools again*
And now you... you, my dear friend, you draw us a bare chest Yoh with each and every of the muscles exactly the way YA would draw them *O* Me want chocolate just looking at his abs *oooops* ... and high five for these serratus anterior muscles (are you the one who taught YA how to draw them because wow they sure look like those she draws *O* and I like that!!)
Hope you do not mind if I tell you about just two details. You know how I am ^^" and I truly do not want you to think that this could be the most important for me or what I'll keep in mind of your drawing *nononono*
- maybe it is because I am a pervert, but I somehow think that the... let's all it the "very middle of his boxers" should look a bit 'rounder'
- his thighs are slightly! too thin IMHO. For me Yoh's thighs are a bit more powerful (like those of Asami) than how they are on your drawing. But of course not to the point of looking like Schwarzenegger's thighs XD

Last but not least, I do not know if Yoh is modeling for Takaba, but wow the photographer (whoever he/she might be) should be careful, because Yoh's eyes might pierce through their viewfinder. OMG this intensity in the eyes that you gave him even under this lock of hair... sooooo Yoh *inserts another fangirl's squee*

*looks left, looks right. No flying dragon to be seen. Jumps on the model and XXXXX censored*

Thank you, my dear friend, for drawing this Yoh and letting us see him filling our screen and moooooooooooore ^____________^
*huuuuugs*

[immorta_beloved]

Hey!!

Sorry for late reply, I didn't have much time to check LJ lately ^_~

Your comment made my day, I'm really pleased you took your time to write it ^_~ luckily there are still people like you around, man of them watch without leaving even the smallest comment -.-" BTW hope you didn't nosebleed to death on your desk after seeing this xD xD *hands tissues*

I'm glad you like my sketch, and his abs, it took me a long time to learn to draw them properly (I'm trying to improve more and more everyday xD) I'm honoured you think his body looks like those YA draws, and it's not a coincidence, she's been my inspiration since I read the very first page of VF and so I try to model my drawing style on hers ^_^ I'm still very, very far from her perfection, though xD xD

As for your critics, it will sound strange, but I'm pleased you took our time to carefully look at this drawing (letting aside his abs which are there to deconcentrate people from noticing any mistake xD) and to point out details that could be improved ^_^ I sincerely thank you for this, since everybody loves compliments, but only through criticism we can really grow up and improve ^_~ so feel free to make any critic on my drawings/fanfiction when it is needed!! ^_~ I'll keep your advices in mind for my next drawings ^_^

As for the "Yoh is modelling for Takaba" it was my silly idea xD total nonsense xD and yes, I wanted his gaze to be intense and penetrating, but now that I look at it, it looks homicidal xD it is almost frightening, but I find it sexy... *perverted fangirl mode on xD*

You're free to jump him (at your own risk, Fei Long can be as possessive and as dangerous as Asami when it comes to his belongings xD) xD when I was drawing him I "jumped" on him many times in my mind xD xD

Thanks for leaving this awesome comment and for your kind compliments ^_~

All the best,

Annalisa