[FIC] Sixth Sense & Sensibility [2/3]

[immodicus]

Sixth Sense & Sensibility [2/3]
Yunho/Jaejoong (Yoochun/Junsu)
PG-13 this part.
Yunho, Jaejoong and Changmin share a gift and use it to kick some paranormal ass.
Humour/Crack/Fluff/...Porn? 8D

Part 1

Still for nullspace, who made this amazing icon for the fic! ♥ skfdh I love you, Shiz. :* Also love to swoon21 who made these seriously awesome manips of JaeHoMin

Comments

[mcdoherty]

the story is so dense, for what it is. it's cute and it's clever and it's quirky and it's sweet and sad and funny and there's exactly the right amount of each element present.

i'm in awe of how natural the whole thing reads? ironic when you consider the supernatural subject matter, but then again, this is you. if there's one thing i've always considered you capable of to an unfathomable extent, it's taking a surreal situation and establishing its' basis in reality. the narative just flows flawlessly from one nuance to the next. you make producing consistently quality writing appear effortless, honestly.

i'm seriously impressed by the application of technical/scientific terms?! whatever research you did, i don't envy the effort; my mind was spinning comparable with jaejoong's reading changmin's long-winded explanation! worth it though, for his world-weary delivery of the jargon layman's terms? XD

without a doubt, my favourite aspect of this piece remains the yoosu arc. recognising that although they no longer exist in solid, human form, nevertheless they experience human reactions and urges? they have one another for eternity, but even forever isn't enough under the circumstances. i dunno, i guess i'm weak for wounded hearts which beat regardless and you've a way of weaving words into something sad but not despairing? it's still sweet, even though it's sore.

the interaction between jaejoong and yunho in the café made me lean forward in my chair like O_________O on tenterhooks!i read about yunho's phone going off and actually slapped my hand over my eyes and exclaimed NO! but then i suppose, if you're about to venture forth with an admission you're attracted to someone, what better reason to be interrupted than there being a ghost which needs excorcising? XD i had to laugh that changmin's device was rendered redundant in the end. if i were being really crass i'd elude to jaejoong's tongue working better than a whatsit, but obviously i'm leaving a considered response and shall refrain!111

there was more blushing yunho. we know how happy this is inclined to make me<333 and god, latterly, just KILL ME WITH CUTE. yunho referring to jaejoong as amazing made me swoon. actually, seriously swoon.

i'm SO impatient to see how this concludes?! where yunjae wind up eventually and whether or not yoosu get their chance to be tactile and what other snark we can look forward to from changmin XD something tells me he's gonna save the day somehow. just a feeling... ♥

[immodicus]

you are seriously trying to give me an ego. stop it!! XD but really i'm just glad it doesn't fail? in your eyes at least. aw the yoosu, why is my bias so obvious D: lmao. but i'm stoked that you like their part of this story! come to the light, fluffy side~~~ 8D hopefully i can finish writing it at the weekend! :D thank you so much for being OSM as always and leaving me a monster comment ♥ ilusm.