Payment

[imladra]

Title: Payment
Pairing/Characters: Kurogane/Fay, Sakura, Yuuko (Characters by CLAMP)
Warnings: A little spoiler-ish for the Infinity arc
Notes: I've read several fics lately where Sakura fan-girls over Kurogane and Fay. They inspired this.

“You still wish it?”

“Yes. Very much.”

“Alright. The payment…”

“I have it.” Sakura glanced at the door, ensuring it

Comments

[ldydragon7]

Yea! First Comment!

I am amazed~ this is both full of drama and crack!tastic and very hot. The depiction of Kurogane and Fai's relationship was wonderful and Sakura's discrption was just right.

“They both made this sound…as though they’d been waiting to touch forever.” I love this line. And then Fai's smile, which just breaks the heart and it was all sweet and sad and lovely and still hot. And then Yuuko was just wonderfully Yuuko and Watanuki was to funny and it all worked.

:)

can I join Yuuko's mailing list please? Also yes please to King/High Priest

[imladra]

Wow! Thank you, I'm so glad to hear it all works, because I really threw a lot of stuff in there. And I've been wanting to write Touya/Yukito forever...hopefully I'll actually do it soon.

I'm really glad you liked it. I really, really enjoyed writing it. (I've never written for Sakura before!)

[ldydragon7]

I think you pulled her off very well.

by the way, where are all these Sakura fangirls over Kuro/Fai fics you meantion?

[imladra]

Here's one:
http://community.livejournal.com/kuroxfai/951669.html

...and of course I seem to have forgotten to put the others into my memories, but I know I read almost all my Kuro/Fay stuff from this community, so they've gotta be here somewhere. There was a recent one where she even gets a nosebleed because she can see Fay's memories...argh. I'll try to find it.

[seizansha]

i want on the mailing list!!! XDDD

but damn, i just love how sakura's showing off how much and how little she knows. she always catches the hidden and not the obvious, even though her descriptions of their moves is pretty hot.

that thing about useless wishes... never noticed it before... can so see watanuki's face when he realizes his is useless. ;3

and the ending's perfect; he wouldn't look and the 'king and high priest'!

[imladra]

Thank you! I just loved throwing poor Watanuki in there...I wasn't going to, at first, but every chance I get, I like to torment him a little. Maybe one day he will look at what he's mailing off. Heh. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

[twisted_oddity]

ba ha ha... wise decision, Watanuki...

The first part was so hot!! I think I would have liked it better if it was just from Sakura's POV watching outside the door or something than her describing it verbally. But still excellent.

[imladra]

Oooo... there's an idea. Maybe I'll just write Sakura spying on them next time. I actually didn't think of that. Heh heh...thank you for reading AND for the great idea! ^_^

[cheydancer]

This is an amazing piece of writing. All the characterizations rang so true and even Yuuko. LoL. And the descriptions the princess gave of Kurogane and Fai were at once erotic and heartbreaking. Lovely.

[imladra]

Thank you very much. Keeping things in character (even in things like this) is always important to me. I'm glad to hear I did it. ^_^ And that you enjoyed it! (And Yuuko is always so much fun to write!)

[imladra]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading! ^_^