my frst ficcy! i so proud!

[iluvjuniors]

titel: field of Inocence
author: iluvjuniors 
summery: daichi get raped by Johnny and go emo. johnny fire him doent want his idolls be emo. daichi gets kleptomania (spl?)

this my fisrt ficcy, pleas be nice! i so shock by what daich done i need t get it out. plees review!!!

Comments

[malfujitaka]

can you please get a beta please? recheck your spelling. please correct your grammatical error and use standard spelling. no short form. it just only give the reader a hard time to read. thank you.

[malfujitaka]

Wow. This is either brilliant or just so damn ironic.

[iluvjuniors]

wat is bete??? plesa tel me i wan know! enlsih no my fist lanuage

grammer suck help???

[malfujitaka]

A beta reader is basically someone who edits your fanfiction before you post it anywhere. You send them your first draft, hey check for spelling, grammar, characterization, etc. errors and send it back to you to be posted. This process is called "beta-ing" or "beta-reading."

anyway, please use complete spelling. as I said, no shortform

[vi_onigiri]

My thoughts exactly ...

[nyw]

Mine too. T_T these are my tears of blood.

[bellekitsune]

[iluvjuniors]

tht hoe! naked leg! ewwwwww!

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[anonymous]

This is some truly impressive trolling. It must have taken you AGES to properly change every word consisting of more than 3 letters, and frankly, as a linguistics student I'm kind of fascinated.
I should still scold you for making light of srsbzns in Idolland, but...well, I guess I'm feeling like a terrible human being today too, yay! :Db ~Gold Star!~

[anonymous]

OMFG Just noticed the "titel"!! LMFAO!